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Due to the many times they have saved both Ponyville and Equestria, the Mane 6 is getting a weekend vacation, all expenses payed, from the town. When something attacks the town, it's up to the minor characters to save the townsfolk and themselves.

THERE IS A SEQUEL HERE: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50052/The-Zeppos

Originally this was written as a script for the Summer Funimation Screenwriting Contest, and I'm working on rewriting in as a fanfic. The change is style requires a change in mindset, so please give feedback to help me with the process.

First Published
25th Jul 2012
Last Modified
28th Aug 2012

A bit of a long exposition, but I still like it. Faved, and tracked.

Awesome! This is gonna be good! Looks like our new "mane 6" is Octavia, Vinyl Scratch, Derpy Hooves :derpyderp1:, Carrot Top, Lyra Heartstrings and Bon Bon.

A sleep army.  Been awhile since I heard of this.  I'll wait to see what happens next.

I guess I was wrong.:ajbemused:

Look like this monkey king plans to enslave the entire town of Ponyville.  I didn't think Trixie would be powerful enough to cast a spell of this magnitude.  I can hardly wait for the next part.

Thank you for the confidence boost! Writing processor, away!

I guess we know what Vinyl device did.  But seriously, the way this chapter ended.  Damn cliffhanger!!:flutterrage:

Can we please have the next chapter?:fluttercry:

I shall work on it today, thank you.:pinkiehappy:

"Derpy Hooves: The Element of Suspiciously Specific Denial.":rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy:

"That," Vinyl said, "is my bass cannon."

Or, as one side character in an episode of 'Doctor Who' put it: "Pure, penetrating sound! It kills!" Given that it could kill Daleks, I'm not convinced that there will be much left of his primateness over than jellified protein stew.

@BenRG Hahahahahahahaha:pinkiecrazy:

Looks like the monkey king was made to see the light.:pinkiehappy:  Next!

AWESOME! Bass cannon for the win! Why is there a red dot on Vinyl's back? Is she an incredibly awesome robot? (If so, Vinyl is best robot.) I like the part where Derpy looks familiar to the monkey king. I think she is the mare he saw centuries ago. Derpy proved in "The Cutie Mark Chronicles" that she is either ageless or can time travel, which seems likely on this story considering how much Derpy is paired with Doctor Hooves on fanon. :derpytongue2:

The Zeppos?:rainbowderp:

Anyway, this was a very good series.  I'm glad other ponies got to save the day.  I will keep an eye out for this sequel.

>> Frankie

The title of the sequel is a reference to an episode of Buffy. Glad you enjoyed it!>>1176812

Awesome! A minor six ponies writing friendship letters to Luna? Yay! Watch out, though. You used "quiet" instead of "quite" at least twice that I saw.

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