I am an autistic brony (with an OC that I'm very touchy about, so don't judge), I like doing roleplays, snuggling, video games, and YouTubing. I also enjoy My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.
When Loyal Defender loses his parents in a terrible accident, he spends years licking his wounds, he prays each night that his life will change. He doesn't give up, night after night after night, until finally, one night, a mysterious glow fills his room...
leaving nothing in its place as it fades.
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Is this humanized or human in Equestria?
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If you read closely and pay attention to the details, you'll know only I'm a human and the rest are ponies. If you're asking because you think the chapters are all separate stories, they're not. They're all part of the same one story.
You're the one. The one who just wrote the greatest story on this whole website! Liked and followed!
Based offa context, Loyal Defender sounds like someone whose adoptive parents are retired Royal Guardsponies.
This better not be a harem. I find it strange that Loyal instantly makes every mare around him wanna be his marefriend. I can understand knowing the future, but this stinks of a Gary-Stu.
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They're not. He's the only human...for now.
Of course, that won't come up for a while.
8863686
Thank you so much! ^-^
Whether or not you intended to use the title of my story for such a nice comment, I highly appreciate it! I was worried people would see my amateur writing as newbie writing, but I'm glad someone appreciates my work!
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It's not like that. I don't have crushes on all of the Mane Six....and not even Twi. This was back when I DID have a crush on her. Like, years ago. This story was back in my amateur days when I was getting the hang of how stories worked.
The hearts don't represent love. They represent something else. A stronger friendship bond.
8865643 OH, you mean like a Social Link or a Confidant?
8865757
What?
If this is a reply to the last reply I made, please don't post them on differing chapters randomly. It makes things confusing.
8865829 Sorry.
Meh. Not exactly a lot of meat on the proverbial bones here.
8863686
Nobody likes a brown-noser (or kiss-ass, depending on your region's slang).
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8871767
Hey, this was my first story, give us both a break! Nopony's perfect, and I tried my hardest! At least he APPRECIATES I tried, unlike you.
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So point out where I was wrong. That guy was being a kiss-ass.
8877653
He was NOT. Some people find certain stories very fascinating, just like I do. There's no right or wrong way to like stories.
Ah the pinkiepiehugs from legends of equestria is finnaly here... >.< its pritty obvious of your username... Now on to the story at hoof.... It needs more structure more feel... This fic just doesnt have that.
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Did you not read the author's note in the first chapter making it obvious this was when I was still an amateur in writing?
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that is true but, you could at least fix it befor posting it.
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And suddenly make it look like my pro had gone back to amateur in writing? It's better to see how one has improved than improving EVERYTHING.
hmmm I wonder who?🤔