I’m a noob writer who goes by the seat of their pants, making a general plot line, but nothing incredibly detailed. I’ll be working on these things and focusing more on the central plot.
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Follow the world of My Little Pony through the eyes of two creatures unheard of. One is Stolen Royalty, the other is an unknown man of faith. Will they survive the challenges? Win or Lose? Only time and the powers above know.
Shadows moved in the dark, golden eyes follow, yet they go unseen. Why?
(First fic)
Sequel: Wargs of Fire and Blade Book II (lol, I don’t know why I didn’t add this earlier)
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This is really good!!! Keep it up dude.
In all honesty, this is my first fiction. If anyone wants to give ideas, I'll happily see if I can place them. Please let me know if I've made any spelling mistakes, as I'm not a good speller.
You spelt ‘break’ wrong in your story summary. You spelt it as ‘brake.’
I must admit, I was a bit skeptical about this story, but it seems my fears were unfounded...
You have me hooked line and sinker!
Any plans on cross-overs with other Displaced?
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Thanks
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I hope to keep your interest as the story continues, though with school and work, it's difficult to find time for writing
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None so far, maybe in the future 😁
This is getting interesting, and I wonder who that one guard was? Well, if he even was a guard to begin with.
ALL canines are omnivores.
Canines, from domesticated dogs to wild dogs, such as Wolves, Dingoes, Foxes and so on eat grass to clean out their digestive tracts. They will eat fruits that they recognise as safe when they feel they need certain nutrients that meat won't provide or if wild game is unavailable at the time.
I once saw a Dingo pass up a pork sausage and go for a fire-baked potato after it wandered into where my family had set up a camp.
'Walk by Faith. Not by sight.'
Ehh no you didn't, it was the cultists that changed the two of you
Well that's confusing, and slightly ominous
Then how come "Luna" knows about Fang's world and his memories, had it been only Celestia i could have believed it (not eating cake huh, such horrible acting skills), but that Luna is a changeling in this situation as well makes me wonder if there is something else going on
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Well, when I'd originally written the story, I had it where instead of the cultists doing the change, it was Fang. I originally had it where another mind came, killed the cultists, and changed Luna before Celestia came to the rescue. Though I decided to change it, i need to fix that mistake.
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Another mistake that needs fixing.
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Let us know when you do so that we can reread it
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It has been done ✅
Love it!!!
What does the red dot mean? The one before the title?
*Flexes my claws and wonders if I could join in the FUN!!!!!*
She sounds hot and badass!!! Me Gusta.
*sharpens blade*
I’ll take the heavy position for you, I think this calls for dual kukri
Don’t you mean Katana?
Oh, the grammar!
Oh, it's so bad!
Oh GOD, it hurts!
...
Seriously, you need an editor.
Other than that it's fine. It feels a little rushed, but fine.
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Sorry, I forgot to edit it before uploading it.
good work!
Would anyone like to be my editor? Still new and could use all the help I can get
Love it
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Try looking here, it is the highest ranked editorial group on the site.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors
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Thanks 😁
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*inhale* NEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRDDDD!!!!!
Strikes a pose like a victoria's secrets model
"Like what you see?"
Sorry for the bad editing with the last two chapters, I guess that I got excited and wanted to flush them out. Not taking the time to properly edit them, sorry for that.😕
Poor Fang.
Love it
none of your links work.
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Ok, I'll see about fixing them
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Fixed them.
Hmm...I don’t want to call that Guard out, but he seems to be a Demon. Although I could be wrong.
Either Satan, Lucifer, or one of their underlings...
That song is quite beautiful to tell you the truth. Even though Christians and Catholics are a bit different from each other. I still love the way the main character sang the song with pride.
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Wait, I thought Lucifer is Satan.
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It depends on who you ask, what culture/religion, or this: https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&source=web&rct=j&url=https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Devil_Is_a_Part-Timer!&ved=2ahUKEwi1xITAt5nbAhUN8mMKHRf1A2gQFjAVegQIABAB&usg=AOvVaw14JsctmrjqO6Y0cRJETwQ7
I caught the reference you used with the reclamation.
I had that movie on for my nieces when they visited last.
On the topic of movies, I do hope you'll eventually use the songs, 'Deliver Us' and 'Thus Sayeth the Lord' from the Prince of Egypt.
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Lucifer and Satan are the same guy, just that Lucifer is what the Greeks called him, I think. Satan was his original name though, according to my faith at least.
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I thought the same
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Hehe word of god is our vultur of hope. At times it’s our saving point of hope.
Boy,
This. Story. Is. Awsome
Hope you continue it
I was a bit lazy to log in but had to comment
I like the way this story is going
Anyway good luck writing this :)
I may not like overly religious people, but if I were to meet this guy, I might be able to get along with him. And this story is awesome, so keep up the good work!
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Thanks