• Member Since 7th Nov, 2016
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ToxicNSalty


I'm really new to writing so I really don't expect to be good. In time, I hope to improve my writing skills so if you have any to say on how I can be better then let me know.

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Anonymous had always hesitated when trying to confess to Twilight, but you finally worked up the courage to finally do it. So with luck on your side you will surely impress her with the plan that you made.

But like all plans somethings you never counted for. luckily you are no stranger to lady misfortune. So no matter what happens, nothing is going to stop you.

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Comments ( 3 )

Shit premise, shit grammar, and shit pacing. Try again, beta.

You might need to put a second person tag on this one

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Nice constructive criticism. :ajbemused: You said you dont like anon fics in another comment so why are you even reading this?

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