Jason Jaquel is a perfectly normal human. He's not that strong, he's kinda goofy sometimes, and has no special powers. Aside from being immortal that is. Follow him as he makes new friends and experiences new things in Equestria.
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Fragment Soul
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I look forward to some immortal shenanigans
Great start.
I do like this start. I hope you continue this soon
Don't worry I will definitely be continuing this! The next chapter will be out in a week or two at the latest.
That first chapter was funny can't wait for more
Oh my god this was fucking awesome!!! I love it!!!
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Thanks! I'm gonna be updating it soon!
Sorry about not posting a new chapter. I've had some shit going on in my life, like my dad deciding to switch jobs. He also has been taking some time off and has been fucking bogarding the computer the whole damn time. The only time im able to access the internet is at school, but i got work i need to do. Anyways, im not dead yet, and i will be writing and uploading the next chapter as soon as possible. Thanks for bearing with me, and stay frosty.
- Fragment Soul
I think that means nothing if a part of his strathegy is getting hurt in the first place, that more or leaves him as bad as he was in the beginning I guess. I mean he never lerned to properly doge it seems
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Well the thing is he knows how to dodge properly, but he just doesn't bother because he is just gonna heal anyway...
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okay, but I think that has to make him still weaker "if" he would suddenly loose his healings ability and would have to doge.
I mean because he doesn't practise it, he is more likely to mess it up if he has to depend on his skills.
I noticed that in a game, When I don't have to worry about getting hurt, then I got really bad and when I played with a health bar I got better.
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sorry man but i cant take away his "abilities" the whole point of the story is about the fact that he is immortal and cant die or get hurt(at least for no longer than a few seconds. That being said, Jason isn't even a good fighter, the only reason he won is because of the fact that the Minotaur was a noble who never bothered to learn to fight properly, so Jason has more experience considering that he has gotten into many fights over the X amount of years hes been alive.
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i haven't said you should
Sorry guys but im putting this story on hiatus for now because i lack the time and motivation to work on it right now. I have a lot of crap going on that is out of my control, so i cant work on it for now. But dont worry, the story is not dead and it will continue at a later date. Stay frosty my friends!
-Fragment Soul
Alright guys the hiatus is over! I'm currently working on the second chapter, and it will be out soon! Sorry for making you guys wait so long. Anyways, stay frosty my friends!
-Fragment Soul
:D
I'm glad this chapter is finally out :P
I thought it was four.
and I'm so glad for that.
I so loved it that she wasn't going into her "I force Jason to be my stutend or whatever and force him to make many friends" mode.
Nice chapter, but there still needs to be more so that I can really get a good feel for the story.
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Thanks for the input! Also yeah it was four, he drank two bottles while at the food table, brought two bottles to where he was sitting and drank those, went back to the food table and grabbed two more. He was halfway through is fifth bottle by the time Twilight showed up. As for him not acting like a royal, im glad about that too. And as for the forced friendship lessons, i kinda always hated that sorta thing, so yeah.
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Hey I saw that you commented again, but you deleted it... what was that about?
hahaha celestia trying to scold a being that is in a way way more older and even before her parents guys a walking talking fossil with a smartass attitude its great hes like a god among them and hes board out his mind lol well hope more is to come soon i wanna see how this plays out
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thanks man. I will be updating as soon as possible.
I'm liking the idea so far. Jason seems like an interesting character, and I can't wait to see what kind of shenanigans someone like him will get up to!
Holy shit! Thirteen billion years!!!
Kewl. I'll keep an eye on it.
A great story, I am waiting for the continuation. Good job, good luck
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This would be much better if you had a editor.
Obligatory "IT LIVES!" Comment. But seriously take you're time, we've waited this long, we can wait longer if need be.
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Yeah man, lol. I'm glad you stuck around, tbh, I wasn't sure how many people would stick with the story.
good story and interesting character, i hope you continue on it ^^
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i will as soon as i can, but things are pretty hectic rn. as soon as things clear up and i get a computer, ill continue it.