True Ending: Adoption of a Rainbow Maned Pegasus
Rainbow did not hesitate to fly down full speed to catch the falling Drake. She couldn’t let him die, and she would not let him die.
“Drake! Hold on!” She shouted, as she was getting closer. She caught up with him, and got him with her hooves. Drake looked up at her, in surprise as she took him, and flew back up into the cave. She let him down, now her other friends being present.
“Kid, what were you thinking?!” Rainbow asked. She was happy to see him alive, but he almost got killed. Drake let a few tears fall from his eyes, as he broke down.
“I’m sorry, I had a nightmare where you said that no one would ever love me, and I deserved to die. Then I heard voices telling me to jump off a ledge, so I wouldn’t be a problem anymore and-“ His ranting was cut off when he felt Rainbow wrap her hooves around him. Drake was shocked, but smiled as he hugged back.
“Drake, don’t listen to that other Rainbow Dash, she doesn’t know what she’s talking about.” Rainbow said, pulling away a bit. “You know.... I’ve been growing very attached to you... So much, that I want to adopt you...” Drake gasped, as he let out a smile.
“Really? Can I call you...”
“Yes, you can call me mom.” Rainbow finished for him, as he hugged her tightly.
It was the next day, and the mane six made it back to Equestria. Drake was with them, still a human, and he could walk on clouds somehow. He was at his new cloud home, with Rainbow. He once again felt happy, and his shattered mind was slowly being fixed. Rainbow loved Drake as her son, as the child she saved from the monster that was his father.
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that was greatl you got me curious HOW can drake walk on clouds i hope you'll make a sequel so i can see how drake adapts to equestria and you answer how he walk on clouds as a human
8902783
Whoohoo! True ending is Best ending!!! Question now that RMG is complete will your writing be focused on ATM or will you be working on another story such as your SH story or John's alternative ending
8902789
Yeah! A sequel would be awesome! *Hugs fluttershyfan3030*
sorry but if you maybe would have at least taken your time to describe a bit more it would have looked much better, here I just get the feeling....well that happened.
To be honest yes I always like it a bit if I read more about how they hesitate or that....it is somehow more compliated or at least emotional, but that was somehoe less than I expected to be the minimum.
Sorry but that somehow dissapointed me a bit.
Yes I would still like a sequel but maybe a rewritten ending too
8902807
*i blush but accept the hug* i know right
8902865
I will. The reason it seems rushed is because I had to write the ending chapter on my phone, which is hard for me to do. When I get my laptop back, I’ll make some edits
8902875
well okay that explains it but maybe you should have waited then. Not sure how to say it else, but better wait till you have a better solution to write the chapter instead of posting something like this, or maybe start and just mention that the current chapter gets updated, that is the only alternate solution I can think of right now
8902875
Can't wait till you get your laptop back
this is a great story i hope a rainbow maned guardian 2 comes next i don't want this to end
whoa
Oh I love a true happy ending :-)
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can we get a sequal for the true ending (hopefully one where the kid isn't a gary stue)
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I’ll try. Maybe he’ll get in trouble a lot due to him getting bullied
8910703
no thats been done to death what about him struggling with depression and tries sevreal more times to take his life because depression doesnt go away over night
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You’re right on that, believe me, I know. I’ll try to do something like that.
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I look forward to more
8903037
Hey! A B-17!!
very interesting story, I am looking forward to more such stories. good job
👍👌
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Thanks, mate.
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Understood.
I shall now sample some of tour recent works.
I’d like to see a sequel with Drake enjoying life in equestria
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I have considered coming back to this, but first I need to deal with this burnout, but who knows...?
Awwwwww too cute loved it
Good plot, but lousy development and ending. Serious spelling mistakes and there are quite a few things that make no sense. However, I hope that in the future you can improve. I usually have spelling mistakes too; but writing is about learning from mistakes.