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LegionofPony
I write commissions and sometimes write stuff I come up with too. Nuff said.
LegionofPony
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Okay, you won me over. No sex at all this chapter, but I love this universe. By any chance could you be convinced (through strong pleading) to make this a longer story? I love the potential for a completely Equis domination. Maybe there are still quiet groups dedicated to stopping Nightmare and have gone dark, and she uses Pip to help flesh them out in the future. So much potential. I fell in love this first chapter.... Is this pure clop or will a storyline eventually develop where Nightmare senses a threat from somewhere. Sorry if I am just throwing this at you so randomly, but this first chapter has caused me to fall in love with this world and I was just curious. This hits all my buttons and marks and despite the shaky start, I still loved this story.
I will follow this and read the next chapter!
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I don't know if the story will be continued, as it was commissioned and I don't know if the commissioner wants to continue past this one-shot. I think this story will be mostly if not exclusively sexual, but I'm happy you like the universe I've crafted (though I'm sure it's been done a million times before already).
I love it.
a good short story that is a really good read.
Oh this is perfect, Love NMM Futa Dom on male it's great, can't wait to see what happens next for the two of them.
You had me until brief vaginal sex, anal sex (male on herm, herm penetrated)
No, but really. Can't wait to read this x3
Do you have a part 2 ?
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Thank you, glad you liked it!
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Hope you read and liked it!
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There's no planned sequel at this moment in time, but it's not ruled out yet.
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Please let me know if you do
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Yeah that was my intention when I commissioned this story although I did have thoughts on how would the story continue if I were to commission another one. It would be more of a prequel rather than a sequel. But beyond that I have no plans on doing a continuation as of yet.
Is one of the idea what I had in mind Pipsqueek parents is also a part of this rebel group and pressuring Pipsqueek to assassinate NMM due to her having a soft spot for the colt.
But yeah this commission was more clop than plot focused. If you want to continue the story I wouldn't mind throwing in $20 or so and whatever ideas I have in mind.
great story, i liked that part where nightmare moon curb-stomped pipscream and then fiddled with his joy stick while he was unconscious, and the finale where pipscrotum had his cheese stick acupunctured to death was helluva ending. keep up the great work, tease
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Are...are you high?
9108357 Thanks, fixed.
9121697 Thanks, fixed those too, but don't see what's wrong with the last one.
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You need to add a period.
9149468 There is and has been a period there.
Goddammit, I was with you til you got to the futa shite. Fuck's sake lol.
Damn this was a pretty good read. Any chance of you continuing the story?
That wholesome ending was great.
A wonderful first chapter for a two chapter story
Luna gets practice playing long games...
Heh. Magic.
I haven't read this story (I ended up here through a random link on another story) but based on the description I don't think the Sad tag is warranted. Sad is a genre tag implying the purpose of the story overall is to jerk tears, not a warning tag that there may be sad elements in the story. We used to use it for dramas prior to the Drama tag being a thing. The Death warning tag is fine (and as you mentioned that tag does not imply character death), but if you change Sad to Drama you could remove the disclaimer (if you wanted to). (You don't even need the Drama tag if drama is not a focus of the story, for that matter.)