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This is Halloween, This is Halloween...

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This story is a sequel to A Shattered Rainbow Rock


After finally settling down from the ensuing drama and chaos all month, the Dazzlings and their new friends are ready to start calming down and try to enjoy their lives as much as possible.


This series is going to be a collection of shorts all taking place after the events of A Shattered Rainbow Rock. Enjoy. Be warned; some shorts may contain spoilers for the first story!

Chapters (22)
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Comments ( 249 )

Actually, I think this is a good way to start off the series, really. You need you give yourself more credit man.

I think you have overplayed SunsetΒ΄s level of violence and sadism. ItΒ΄s hard to believe she crossed so many lines and yet no authority intervened before. Principal Luna was both passive and incompetent, and apparently the cops had to wait until the end of the Battle of the Bands to remember they had a dangerous criminal in the area.

It would have been better if Sunset exerted her influence in a subtler way (intimidation, blackmail, threats) creating and atmosphera of fear and insecurity in the school, while at the same time keeping a cover of plausible deniability.

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I actually did intend on doing that when writing her, but something inside me clicked and I didn't end up doing it. :ajsleepy:

Anyways, I do hope you'll find some enjoyment in the shorts that may come. :twilightsheepish:

It's interesting, and like the changes. Will Sunset return somehow to cause more problems?

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While it sucks for the Rainbooms that they're getting all the hate from the students, but they need to learn that every action have consequences.

Also, Derpy (or should I say Muffins) as the tough girl? I didn't expect that, but awesome! Are we gonna see more of her in the future?

Anyway, I'm liking this so far, keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

A good start to the series so far.

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Thanks! Hope you enjoy more to come and likes are appreciated! :twilightblush:

Great start! And Derpy was awesome!:twilightsmile:

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Great start!

Amethyst shook her head. "I still think it was a dumb idea for you to try and stand for them."

"Well, I'm still standing by my statement. You let them get off way too easily." Amethyst scowled, leaning against the other locker.

Thank you Amethyst, I argee with her that the Rainbooms were giving a slap on the waist, total bs!

P.S. I love this alt world of Derpy is a badass! :rainbowlaugh:

Hmm, interesting. I would have liked more exploration into Lyra's heritage, but that's just maybe me. Still, interesting lead-up to a mirrorverse version of the third movie.

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I think I might do some more explanation and look into some more shorts along the way.

I shouldn't be surprised that Sunset's bullying had to do with Lyra suppressing her Japanese heritage. That's an all-too-real aspect of bullying, sadly. Still, it's good that she's ready to embrace her background again without fear. :twilightsmile:

Also,

"The Friendship Games are coming! WHOO!!!"

Hook for a sequel? :pinkiehappy:

I'm happy to see that Lyra is more open to her heritage and not let Sunset and the Rainbooms bullying keep her down.

Also:

"The Friendship Games are coming! WHOO!!!"

I smell a sequel! :pinkiehappy:

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Very nice.

Great to see another character with a mixed heritage. I can relate a bit to that myself.

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I will just say it...
AU of this story where the Dazzlings AIN'T that forguving at alll!

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Ok ok ok Jeeze. Think we all get it.
anyways yes the Rainbooms got off a little easy, but they are still paying the price, heck worst then Sunset in the other fics at times.
They only have each other for comfort, and very little comfort at that.

Three of them have little sisters in comas, the other two are outcasts as well.
They are suffering badly, and only get worse for them.

Meanwhile a remorseless sunset is in prison having a bad time i bet.

"The Friendship Games are coming! WHOO!!!"

Annndddd..... Here come's Twilight...

This is going to be fun.

I smell love in the air! Muses?

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Maybe... Maybe just wait til more is up, just to be on the safe side.

This was cute and fun. I liked it!

Hey now, looks like you used my idea I mentioned about Adagio teasing Trixie, excellent job on it! :twilightsmile:

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Thanks. Actually, no, making this statement, thank YOU for suggesting it. :twilightblush::twilightsmile:

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Huh, I knew there was something different, regardless excellent job & you're welcome! Hope to see more of Adagio teasing Trixie! :pinkiehappy:

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Maybe even going a little more than just the teasing... :raritywink:

It looks like Trixie has a crush on Adagio. I wonder if Adagio felt the same way? :ajsmug:

Nice chapter by the way!

This is from my childhood and it would make sense.

I'm a simple man, when I see good ships
I like and favorite.

Wonderful update! How do you think you will handle the Friendship Games?

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Ohohoho, Trixie. You enjoying the seductive siren? :trixieshiftright:

Enjoying the sequel as much as the original.

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This isn't a sequel, silly!

That's for much later in time:raritywink:

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Well it is technically these do happen after. I'm curious if there would be Anon-A-Miss Incident at some point?

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That is true.

But as for that... no. Anon-A-Miss is not my department, and its been done to death at this point.

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Well I was more thinking an alternate version for the Rainbooms then what most people do which is turn in a super depressing tale but maybe someone with more experience with darker themes could do it.

Oh Amy... Hugs Goddamnit Sunset!

Poor Amy. :fluttershysad:

I'm glad that the two of them made up.

Poor Amethyst. But I really, really feel bad for her dad too.

I'm glad that they're back together as a family again.

Man, Amy's backstory definitely made me cry. As well as her reunion with her dad. :fluttercry:

Ya see!? This is another reason why the Rainbooms should be in jail with Sunset, they clearly destroyed this family & broke them for a long time!

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I can get it, After what she went thru because of the teachers and the bullies. she lost all hope and transferred to deep fears her father would hate her.

i like to see her Father confront these teachers and rip into them verbally, as well as the Rainbooms.

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Adagio is wrong. The Autobots have Optimus Prime. Therefore, they are the winners.

Oh, and Trixie and Adagio. Yeah, suspected that might happen.

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Remember, Alternate Universe :raritywink::trollestia:

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*sniff* That was beautiful!! :raritycry:

Oh, Adagio... Hugs

I support this ship. Never let that girl go, okay Trix, you hear? Comes along only once in a lifetime, love does.

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