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An Intricate Disguise


Selling out has never felt so dirty.

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Guilt-Ridden Addendum: I lurved the use of alliteration in this. Good, eloquent inner monologue. I wanna see you write sad post-break-up stuff.

Well I found this wonderful. The world needs more fics written from Mauds perspective.

Aw, I love everything about this, but especially Maud's narration.

Also:

"On the contrary," he smiled, kissing her on the snout and cuddling up to her, nestling his head between the crook of her neck and her withers. "I think we should see much more of her."

I think you meant to write me and my instead of her.

For a moment there I thought their sex is gonna be dull and bo-...I can't help it, it's their personality :trollestia:

That was the most adorable sex scene I’ve ever read.

He only says "technically" once in this whole thing. I call shenanigans.

He's such a stick-in-the-maud. Also way OOC because he did't say "technically" over 10 times.

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This pun was so inevitable, it makes me wonder if the authors did it on purpose.

"However?" I stood there for what felt like a minute, eventually beginning to wonder what was taking him so fucking long. Had I done something wrong? Did he not want to have sex with me? Was he having second thoughts? Did he think it was okay to juststophalfway through foreplay and sit there in total silence while I stood here like a fucking ornament? What the fuck was wrong with him?!

My frown lowered by another degree, but it was still barely an obtuse angle.

Finally, the bastard spoke. "I was trying to decide whether to say that 'I thought you deserved to be screwed now' or whether to ask if you 'wished to engage in full intercourse'."

...I love him. I absolutely love him with every fibre of my being. He's the sweetest and most considerate oddball I've ever met and I wish I'd never questioned him.

I love the flip-flop here. It shows how worked up she is that her emotions are so heavily tied to his answer. Excellent.

This is cute as hell

Funny, but all i think this is how sex with sheldon off of big bang theory would be like.
bazinga!!!

Probably my favorite thing about this is that it's from Maud's POV. We need more Female POV fics.

Well now he's a really hard stick in the Maud. 😎

not sure how many episodes are already out there, I just was able to see the first two, but I already fear this is actually true and Maud got a clone friend like Pinkie.

I can't fap to this. It is too cute for that.

You just had to put a "technically" in there didn't you?:facehoof:
I couldn't help it, the whole story was narrated in the voices of Sheldon and Amy. If anything, this is how I would imagine them going at it :rainbowlaugh:

The use of Maud being highly responsive in her monologue is ingenious. You have a great gimmick that has a nice contrast to it, though it feels partly unfiluflled.

You hit the nerd lover perfectly in this. There's more set up than sex, but in this case, I enjoyed it all the more for it.

Also, skirts reads your snazz, so that makes me sad (ha).

Huh, well this was a pleasant surprise. I watch a clip of The Maud Couple, then get curious about porn between the two of them, and I think "I bet Mudbriar is really well-endowed", and then I find this story. I both find myself surprised and a little impressed that it wasn't just me that thought that...and SUPER TURNED ON!!!!!!!! YOU ROCK, INTRICATE DISGUISE (pun not intended, but welcome nonetheless).

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