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Commissar Rarity


You call this romance, Charlotte?

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It's the best day ever! I mean, how else would you describe Rarity's birthday?
But Sweetie Belle's present proves a little too much to handle... After all, how does one deal with an evil, possessed sewing machine?

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Random things about this fic you likely don't care about!

-Second ever pony fic I wrote; around late Feb-early April. The reason it sat for so long before publishing is it was supposed to be a story in an anthology project. Alas, the project is no more and the two fics I wrote for it are finally being touched up (or in this case, being published).

-This was also intended to tie into a longform story I was writing about the Age of Disharmony. I took a break from it and ultimately lost interest in writing it. Which is a good thing, sort of. The meta format it was being written in would not jive in anyway with FiMFiction, and I had made a rather large canon error which couldn't well be fixed without heavy rewrites.


I may very well do this little trivia comment for every fic I write.

Awesome fic.

I love the way you handled Arazahod, and that ending just nailed it all. :rainbowlaugh:

She fainted.

I fainted.

You fainted.

Everything fainted.

Mind blown.

THIS IS EPIC STORY. I TRACK!

Doombot, is that you?

"I am your god now!
Sorry buddy, but it ain't gonna work seducing virgins if you're a sewing machine.

Delightful.

Will there be a sequel? This was not what I was expecting.

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I fail to see a way I could write a sequel. There's zero loose ends to tie up, aside from the punchline at the end. And a fanfic based on that would just be a pointless retread of Suited for Success. If you're referring to the references to the Age of Disharmony and San Anponyo and the like, I mentioned why I never followed up on that in my first comment.

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I see you're here. Why is your profile pic Sniper, anyway?

That sewing machine was just SO OVER THE TOP, that like and favorite. Yes.:pinkiehappy:

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It's not the Sniper. It's the Tenth Doctor from Doctor Who.

976375

But, what does the doctor have to do with Team Fortress-

You know what?

What does Trixie being epic have to do with a spirit of disharmony except for waifu rights? I have no room to talk.

Shutting up now.

Rarity saw all her friends (plus Spike) entering the shop

That's wrong on so many levels, that I couldn't stop laughing for quite a while. My insides hurt because of you. I would sue you over murder attempt, but the rest of the story made me laugh even harder, so I forgot what I was going to say.

976375>>976443 Check my avatar! I need attention!

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It's too bad you destroyed him when you did.

His reaction to seeing the stoned Discord would have been priceless.

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