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Kewiei777


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It is clearly not a pleasent experience to watch princess Celestia walking towards you with a blade when you admire her but it happens to me. This is a story of a nobody.
This story starts 100 years after nightmare moon is banished.

sex is only mentioned in this story.
Gore tag is for small wounds.

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Comments ( 2 )

Interesting concept, less cliché than the majority of the HiE fics. As always, the background of the human character is irrelevant and detrimental to the story.

It still has the potential to be a good story, especially with that nice little twist.

The background of the human was designed to show that this human always think too much while do so little, and he always worry about things that most people don't care. Being mentally fragile, is what I wanted to show. But after reading your advice, I find that maybe you are right. This feature is not used in the later story nor it is necessary. Thank you for your advice.

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