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I used to live a hollow life until I met somebody more hollow than me.
The shreds of what she left behind patched the void in my heart.

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Chapter 0 of: Part 1 - ENCOUNTERS · 31st Mar 2018 · 148 words
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Chapter 1 - skin sensations · 5th Apr 2018 · 4,069 words
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Comment posted by andrizzi deleted Apr 5th, 2018

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AngelaHLF #2 · Apr 20th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1 - skin sensations ·

To be clear, I’m not a thief. I admit I had every intent to sell those jewels for my own gain, but I had the same right as everybody else. All the jewelry business is a rip off for rich people: you find a useless rock on the ground, claim it your own, you overprice it and sell it for no use.

That doesnt justify his actions, if he steals he is a thief. Just because he feels that way towards the Jewelry business, doesnt make it true. Also, is he thinks that the Jewelry business is a rip off, why did he steals the jewels in the first place? I mean...he thinks that they are useless rocks and then admited that he had every intent to Sell those jewells, would not that make him a scammer and a hypocrite?

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andrizzi #3 · Apr 21st, 2018 · · · Chapter 1 - skin sensations ·

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Yep. Totally.
The point about this main character is for him to be flawed.
However, since he's also the narrator of his story, he will be the one to justify his own actions.
I think it's very fun to write and, even more, to see the reaction of the reader.

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