Sunset is struggling to cope with her nightmares and it's now been years since THAT incident.
After high school ended and all of her friends parted ways to pursue their ambitions and goals, Sunset decided to go back to Equestria.
It was all going well at first, until she started having feelings towards her mentor and more importantly, the fate of Equestria was layed in their hooves.
This sounds really good. I can't wait to read more.
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Hah, thanks.
I was really scared of publishing because I've never been the best at stories or grammar, but you saying that really reassures me
8817505
No problem. The story sounds really good but the SunLight part is what I'm looking forward to.
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Who isn't looking forward to sunlight? Sunlight's the best! hopefully it'll end up as good as I'm hoping, i really don't wanna disappoint
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I'm sure you won't and it's my OTP of MLP. And my profile picture proves it.
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Same here, Sunlight's my favourite, I'm a bit worried I might run out of sunlight soon tho, nothings sounds like more of a nightmare than that
8817625
lol Right.
I for one am enjoying this story. Very interested where this goes. :)
8822705
Ahh, thank you! I just hope that what I have in mind both turns out well and for the simple fact that people will like it.
You forgot to add a period at the end of the last sentence in the synopsis. Will other Equestria Girls characters appear in this story?
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Oh, thanks! I'll do it now. And no, just Sunset. I'm sorry
Now things are getting interesting. Keep it up.
you think after so many invasions that Equestria would ramp up the guards.
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Maybe they did but they got to them first, you never know.
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Sometimes when I edit I accidentally miss a period or a capital somewhere, but I usually never leave a noun without a capital letter.
I've thought about it, but I think I’d rather try editing on my own. It's not like I'm astoundingly bad, there is sometimes a bit of repetition in my work because I can't think of another way to describe it but other than that I'm not sure.
World*
Capitalize
Bad ever*
Is there supposed to be two?
Both commas should be periods
Playing*
Maned*
And I doubt it*
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Thank you, I'll change it as soon as I have the motivation to do so
Technically Rainbow and Fluttershy were the rude ones. Talking about someone as if they aren’t in the room is generally frowned upon.
Well if it makes you feel better I think the premise sounds good. Please respond to this comment.
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To be honest, when it comes to publishing things I've always been worried about what other people think so it always stopped me from wanting to carry on with stories or even posting a picture/drawing. Because I felt like not posting at all is better than one person disliking it. I don't know, I just wish it wasn't like that because I know that's not how it works
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Haha, thank you. :)
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I have a story saved on my computer that I don't think I'd ever published in fear of being laughed at or called stupid. And then there are these stories that I have published that I'm afraid to carry on for the same reason. It's just that I hope to satisfy everyone while reading chapters of a story I've made but I know I can't please everyone. But knowing that someone out there doesn't like what I'm doing makes me scared to carry on in fear that the story will and up turning out rubbish.
It's that paranoia of if one person distastes it, many many others will. But if one person likes it I only think THAT person likes it. It's kind of unfair haha
in the end it doesnt even matter