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NandyRewman


Do you think goosebumps for blind people are like reading a bunch of jumbled letters?

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Fluttershy has embraced a new method for coping with the difficulties of life... art.

But one can only give so much before they lose sight of the goal.

UPDATE: Huge shout out to MatfixBrony for doing a killer read of this! https://m.youtube.com/watch?t=2s&v=DSUGIovAKgA
Link to the video is provided so go check it out!

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Comments ( 11 )

I feel like this would have been better as a chapter story. Sure, the perpetual blank state of the canvas can get a reader thinking, and I compliment your word structure, but given the fact that the story is only a bit longer than a thousand words, it's hard to take the imagery and the message seriously. Other than that glaring weakness, I think it was a decent job

Comment posted by Sage of the Leaf deleted Mar 24th, 2018

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Thank you for the wise words!
I get what you're saying about not being able to get a more in depth grasp on the meaning behind the canvas and why it stayed blank, but I wanted the poem/narrative to be short to consolidate the topic and reflect how quickly someone's mental state can deteriorate.
But thank you for the constructive criticism!

Well, this looks like it’s gonna be a really great fic...
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Oh shit, this was deep.

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Yep, that's just about the effect I was going for! Lol

hoLY SHITE!!!

good story, now i will go sit in a room with lights in my eyes for hours now

Pretty interesting and sad story, I honestly can relate to fluttershy in this scenario only in my case it's writing. Do you mind if I do a reading of this?

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Why of course you can! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Alright thank you I'll be sure to do your story justice.

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And if you could provide a link, I'd like to put it in the story description.

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I will I hope I can do your story justice if you want to see my previous readings so you have an idea of my reading quality I linked my channel on my profile page

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