Rainbow dash never thought that she would never fall in love. One day that changed. Join Rainbow Dash and her love adventure.
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Way too short and superficial. There just wasn't nearly enough material to justify what you're going for. Without enough build-up, especially where feelings like love are concerned, the story feels cheap and rushed. Don't you think it would take more than a cute face to enamour Rainbow Dash? At the very least, she'd likely want him to prove himself, to make sure he's "awesome" enough.
Just my two bits.
The thing about this story is that in every chapter something different is going to happen at the begining it is fast pase but as the new chapters are created it will slow down and go into more detail but my main goal was for this story to be approved now that it is i will go in to more detail of how she fell in love with this pony but as i said in the summary there is still more to come in the future so hold on to your saddle it takes time to develop a good story but i thank u for your concern.
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Don't publish just for the sake of publishing. Your readers will appreciate it if you put as much work and care as you can into your work before publishing it.
i can agree but i have more story ideas on the way but i wanted this one to be first i figured that some of the readers would like to watch as the story gets better but i understand what you mean
i have been working on this story for 6 months and i do not want to release all the chapters at once i want it to be like a series you know what I mean.
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thank hi how are you