I have very mixed feelings about this story. Your writing is quite excellent, but this is far too dark for me to enjoy the way I would similar stories.

I can't stop reading though, morbid curiosity I suppose. (No pun intended)

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Thank you.

Yeah this is pretty dark, health complications are Gladi's kink, and they make writing this fun because they're a pretty good way to show just how big sh's getting without using purely sized based descriptions. (Although I'm slowly growing to hate ellipses more and more)

The ending however, should be good.

Well, I think that this story is becoming one of my favourites fetish stories on this site. This poor mares body can barely take any more, yet she still pushes on, striving to become such a massive pile of blubber. I hope that we will see more of Zamboni (and sone special zebra fattening potions hopefully ;)) . Can't wait for the next morbid part!

Ps, why is a section of your text larger in size towards the start of the chapter?

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I'm not sure, might make a Zamboni story itself, just a short one, but I don't think she'll be returning to the story until the final chapter, which isn't far off.

Maybe play a little bit of homage to where the name comes from (Champions online, a canadian terrorist group is shipping out explosive laden Zambonis to hockey games) and have her stuffed with Maple Syrup and Poutine.

Google docs Copy + Paste shenanigans, should be fixed now though. Thanks for the catch man

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No problem!

I never want this story to end!

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All things must end, that said the planned ending is open to a sequel, if'n you wanna take a shot at it.

I ain't gonna stop you, maybe even edit for ya.

Do you have a release date for the next chapter?

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Nope, but once it's ready it's going up straight away.

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Ditto. We're way past the point of what I could consider attractive, in fact I feel a little pukey, but I want to read this til the end. It really is morbid curiosity, nothing more,

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Yay, Gladi & I made a trainwreck of a story.

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Oh yes, that is rather a handy quality as well!... and a necessary skill XD

I'll admit, some parts late in Chapter got to me a 'little', though it's mostly because I haven't seen it before, it takes a little time to adapt, but when it comes to 'fantasy', There are extremely few things that I can't adapt to accepting people's interests in XD [it usually involves things I won't really mention publically due to their actual content and specificity being enough to be rude to bring up, even in expressing distaste for them.]

Aside from the bits that got to me for a little while, I'm rather enjoying it so far XD Though I'll admit, my preferences lean more towards affection and romance, I can see how it would appeal to some anyway ;3

Man you are killing me with the wait xD

Looking back on it, I was hoping you could elaborate on something a bit.

It was the chapter where Midnight was still mobile and went to the restaurant to binge. She. he, or the narration accused the owner of trying to kill her. My question is:HOW?

Maybe I'm WAY over thinking this, or maybe it's the feeding conceit that I loathe(that food is instantly converted to fat, no digestion required).

No matter how much her stomach can stretch, her GI won't get any longer so there would be a ceiling where she won't gain any faster.

So why would she have a heart attack while stuffing her face, and why would it be blamed on the owner.

But hey, clop, I'm probably greatly overthinking this!

Sigh, only 1/10 of blob stories really do anything for me, and it's either normal skinny ponies or blobs, almost never an in-between. Cie la vie.

Just like midnight. I need MORE!

I actually find it most arousing if they did take their health into consideration and did a lot of strength training and excersize as well. To become big and not just a slob.

Honest question, are you actually planning to finish the story?

She didn't even stop rubbing her marehood when they returned, and coo'd softly once she released her juices on Midnight's front. "Don't bother with a pot, she's big enough I can mix it all in her... this is going to hurt, Midnight Blossom- but accept it. I can give you six full months of life, but beyond that..." The zebra didn’t bother to say anything more on that line of thought, the end result was painfully obvious to all three of them

Three months more and the hire would be born

How's it coming?

I can't wait anymore. I need to know what happens

Day 4523: We are still waiting... the world is collapsing around us with this virus, yet we still wait

Sweet Celestia.... The best (but admittedly only) story of the sort for this fetish that I've read so far! XD

The only gripe I really have with it is the vomiting that happened in chapter 5.... As I have an innate phobia of vomiting... (Which is addmitedly a bit of a curse with this kink heh).... Like, I get it, it's there to prove how much Midnight is actually forcing herself beyond any reason on the planet, but.... shudders.... That was hard to read. 😰

The rest of it I absolutely ADORE! Especially the part where she breaks furniture, doorways, machinery, or where the manager got so rage filled that she contributed to Midnight's vision hehehe! I really hope you do post the last chapter or two eventually.... I wanna see how big she gets before she keels over and dies heh.🤔😁