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Huh. I quite like this. It feels somewhat unfinished, but still a succinct and effective read. Thanks for writing it!
I like this idea conceptually, but I think you aimed too low. You definitely could've gotten a solid 1 to 2.5K out of each of these three. Currently, it just feels like nothing really goes on. I do like how you handled Aria. I like the idea that, in a way, she's weaker than the other two. It would've been a good use of her character if you explored the dichotomy between her rage and her weakness in more detail.
This definitely wasn't a bad fic, but a couple hundred words per chapter is what's keeping this as an alright story, rather than a good or a great one.
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Hmm.....
You make a good point. More on this later.
I, on the other hand, appreciate profoundness through brevity, and was pleasantly surprised here. Usually I'm rather unimpressed by drabbles (to be honest I can't stand them), but this one made the words count, I feel.
Opinions! (No, I didn't downvote that other comment, it was like that when I got here. :P)
Sonata is by far my favorite one. The other ones are good and all but I got what I expected with them. Didn't expect 'nata to be self-aware, however, so seeing her as such here sparks my own imagination with regards as to how to write her.
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I feel the need to reiterate that I didn't dislike this story. I don't want that to be what people take away from what I said. I don't think this story is bad. I just think it didn't quite live up to its potential.
Just to be clear.
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I know. I intend to tie this into my story Raison d’Etre eventuality.
I like it. I like it and I want more.
Wow. Another grear one, Allykitty. Immediate reactions after Battle of the Bands too. Honestly, this feels like it could fit right into your Homecoming universe. Also glad you're off Hiatus. Now I can read more!
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I second this.
Contracts are the noose by which humans hang themselves.
Very impressively written.
This is very short, but perfectly captures how I think the sirens would react. Nice work!
I can totally see Aria doing this.
Good concept.
Really great story, I love how we see each of them react, keep up the great work!
Damn. Just. Damn. I wanna see what happens next!
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This ties loosely into Raison d’Etre. Sort of a spiritual predecessor in a way.
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I'll give it a look-see. Thanks!
Well you had it coming all along.
Good luck doing that, it'll be impossible.
Yep, it really is. 😠
Yeah, that seems very unlikely.
She. Is the losing her energy and strength.
Yep, they're on their own now.