Spike has been the loyal protector of Twilight, through pen and blade, but when she sends him on a mission too dangerous even for him, he returns missing an arm. Twilight must come to realize what she truly feels for her dragon.
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Spike was missing an arm, but luckily, he had a third leg.
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Very OoC for Twilight, she would never send an injured ANYONE much less Spike to his potential death. Luna? I could see her making this call with that level of coldness, Celstia would do it with tears in her eyes, but never Twilight. She simply couldn't do it. She would face the threat herself first. We have seen this first hand when she took on Tirek. She would face them with her friends at her side. And what is essentially her little brother safe as he could be. Likely in the crystal empire where the whole population would protect him. Also, she would never demand obediance from a servant the way she did that poor mare.
With that being said, it is well written with only minor errors, a missing letter or word from typing too fast here and there but otherwise well written.
Keeping Spilight alive.
twilight way too OCC written well but no.
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You're all so random. why you do this?
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WELCOME TO FIMFIC
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I'm gonna have to agree with Hamster here.
Twilight falling in love with Spike? It just doesn't make sense when Twilight is the one who raised him from an egg, it would make more sense if she saw him as a brother or a step son.
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Now there's something I don't see very often. But you're right about the OOC. I think it stems from the author living through Spike, not exactly a rare thing here.
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awww and i wanted you to say you don't make any sense that way i could have used the discord quote darn
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The "stories" written here where Spike is front and center and there's a heavy amount of OOC always follow the same pattern. Spike is always a misunderstood "nice guy" who, after being woefully trod upon, gets with whichever waifu the author creeps on or winds up with a harem (if clop). That and Spike becoming an uberpowerful "Drake" who is the only one the Princesses can call upon to save the setting seem to be the usual route these fics go.
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If the scope of this fic had been bigger, then there would have been a lot more depth. The idea had an interesting caveat of a character, consumed by her role to do wrong things for the right reasons, is forced to reassess her life and decisions.
Spike would have been given some flaw of his own, too. He's too much of a perfect character in this. I tend to give my character's weakness, in which, everyone works for each other shit.
This story was a load of crap that I blazed through in a Mcdolands bathroom, leeching off their wifi for four hours. I really can't make an excuse for it.
I stand by the idea still. Having a character lose an arm after being pushed too far is an interesting dynamic to follow, but only when backed by originality and not rushed as this fic was.
I hope you can forgive me and keep in tune for better stuff to come.
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Whole point of it.
This was a great story. I really enjoyed it I can't wait to see more
Always such emotional tales of Spike and Twilight. You really have a knack for making a solid drama with loads of feels along the way.
I also admire your way to paint a scene. My imagination was gripped from start-to-finish. Very well done. :)
Number One...
Number One...
Number One...
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Buuuuh, buh budda budda buh-buh buh buuuh,
buh-buh-buh buh buh buh, buh-buh-buh-buh-buh, Hey!
But yeah, other than that, great story.
Hackjob
Another good one, hope there's a sequel
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With an image and title like that I could've sworn this was a clopfic.
And then Spike grows larger... and Twilight realizes she has... other desires involving Spike.
"Spiiiiiike?"
"Yeeeeees, Twilight?"
"I WANT YOU TO SWALLOW ME WHOLE!!"
Spike: O___________________________________________________O
lol, vore
I do love a good twispike, good job.
Hi B25 I think we have talked before but I choose to keep a eye on your stories and I have to say I love this story and won't mind more but yeah I wouldn't mind reading your other stories and will be around.
Needs some editing, but pretty good for a one shot. Spilight is one of my preferred ships, and I’m glad to have read this.
It's your fault you were too weak? Seriously, Twilight? Fuck you.
Part of me wonders where are the rest of the Mane 6
Well...now I need to pay just to read an entire series about this, thanks for that. How much? Seriously, amazing job, even if Luna and Celestia are gone Discord is eternal so I'm surprised there was no mention of the god of chaos, seriously though, amazing job.
If my favorites are right and memory serves, I actually think this was the first story on the site I read and the one in my head when I wanted to start writing the Chains of War. This story still shows the best and worst of Twilight and Spike. It's a great story!