• Member Since 14th Mar, 2018
  • offline last seen Aug 14th, 2018

Jibbles


doing what I do, and writing stories for my crew! <3

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"It's been two months since our Glorious Hive Queen was put into self exile by her own pride and rage. All of us who didn't agree with the new King left the Badlands into the EverFree forest to hunt and form a tribal existence, however meager it may be... The Hive will survive those traitorous Butterflies... Even if it Cost my Life... Glory To Chrysalis! Long Live the Queen!"

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so really good short story, one of the biggest things i'd say that needs to be worked on is the jump from reading the page to thorax was a little well, blunt and not clear. but other then that it was not half bad.

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Thank you friend
<3

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