SEQUEL to The Tale of Shadow.
Previously a human named Karl, ventured into the realm of Equestria and became a pegasus pony called Shadow. He lived his life for months as a Pegasus and a citizen of PonyVille he made friends with the locals and had fallen in love with the Fashionesta Rarity. Now Karl has been sent back to planet earth by the dreaded Phantom a evil human previously named Josh who also ended up in Equestria but wasn't as fortunante as Karl when he arrived, now Rarity has lost the love of her life and Karl has gone back to a world he doesn't want anything to do with.
So join Karl and Rarity in their adventure in this trilling adventure of love and life as the fight to see one another once again.
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Do I have to read the first one first
If you want but the Prologue is kind of a catch up
Your chapter title seemed a bit vague, it took me a while to realize you meant that the story swapped locations rather than Karl returning to Ponyville. It would probably be the best to just describe the chapter for the chapter title and say "Meanwhile in Ponyville..." and use a horizontal rule under it.
this is starting to get good *stares at screen waiting endlessly for the next chapter*
1122785 Yeah i probably should do that i have started doing that with the next chapter i have been working on last night but the story is in both locations just in certain chapters it will be in Ponyville and the others are on Earth
:1122832 I'm Hoping to use ideas for this one that i didn't use with Shadow but instead i will be using them with Dusk hopefully they will work out as well or even better
GAHHHH! FINISH I GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!
i love the story dude ill probley check every day for the new chapter! 
I have been meaning to write the next chapter but i have been busy with school and Music i havent had the time but i have holidays now so, im going to begin working on it asap
Awesome chapter.
Somepony needs life alert.