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Lordvessel


Thou who art undead, art chosen............

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While Twilight Sparkle plans her grand Friendship Festival, Tempest Shadow diligently plans out her invasion of Equestria's capital city. While she is confident in her own abilities as well as those of her troops, she's taking no risks. Before departure, she requests one of the Storm King's most capable and devious units. Creatures, who like her, were promised something for their service.

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FINALLY FEATURED ON THE TOP LISTINGS ON 09/23/19! WOOHOO!

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 86 )

8859122
I am. Plan to work on it some more tomorrow.

The title and description had my curiosity. Upon completing the first chapter. I can now say that this story definitely has my attention.

What? A new story? And an awesome one at that! Xd
Good on you man! But I hope that your other AWESOM story won't be forgotten? :raritystarry:
How often will this one update? I'm really excited to see what happens!!! Xp:pinkiehappy:

8860228
Im still working on the other one and i still plan to update it by the end of the month, but i just felt like I needed a little variety. This one's going to be much shorter in both chapter and overall length so expect it to be updated more often.

Whoo! An update! And it was AWESOME! Xd
Have a few grammar errors throughout the chapter but nothing really bad. You used the name Carter instead of the one you intended, sangez, in a paragraph.

8869941
Thanks for notifying me. I've already made corrections.

8873748
Considering that I had to look up what Ginyu Force was I'm probably gonna say no.

I knew the artstyle looked familiar.

I look forward to this.

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8873791 8878324
I hope that the Fireteam Storm will teach Shadow Tempest some of their combat/fighting techniques making her more bada** like here:

8885632
Fireteam Storm and John Wick levels of badass

Fuck yeah, you might be onto something here.

8910590
Currently finals week. Sometime in mid to late may.

8911135
take your time with finals, man, and good luck!

Kinda wonder what the princesses reaction will be, but then again I guess I'll find out next time.

I've run out of complimentary remarks, there's only so many times my catch phrase AWESOME will do it. Lol
Totally hyped to see how this will affect the storyline bro. Keep them coming! Xd

Wow, you have gotten my attention in this story. And I can’t wait to see what happens next.

A simple nobility to your story. :ajsmug:

SOWEEE

...as they seemed to already possess things almost out of this world.

Tempest is Goldfish confirmed. (great story, when will the next update be?)

9011168
Dunno really. Currently writing another chapter for my other story.

I want the next chapter. This got me interested.

So far this is moving forward very nicely as a story, characters are fairly compelling and well rounded, it works with the premise of the movie quite well......This is basically the story First Contact should have been :rainbowlaugh: Great work so far, liked and faved :twilightsmile:

Tempest's eyes began to speak volumes on just how ready she was to send this poor stupid soul in the void with one quick blast of her magic.

Angry Tempest is funniest Tempest!

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Hello darkness, my old friend
I've come to talk with you again
Because a vision softly creeping
Left its seeds while I was sleeping
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence

In restless dreams I walked alone
Narrow streets of cobblestone
'Neath the halo of a street lamp
I turned my collar to the cold and damp
When my eyes were stabbed by the flash of a neon light
That split the night
And touched the sound of silence

And in the naked light I saw
Ten thousand…

1:00AM. 12:17AM where I'm at which is Southern California so I'm gonna assume...you live in Colorado?

Anyways, it was a pretty good chapter. Me thinks it's either gonna go horribly wrong and the team is captured in which they're forced to fight the Storm King, or the mission is successful but along the way in the story, the Storm King betrays them and they end up helping the Mane Six but I believe it's best to leave that towards the end.

9510233
Bro not even close. Try further East.

Oh yea yea oh yea yea
It’s alive! Oh yea yea

9510385
Further east? But aren’t you like 1 hour ahead of me? Of course, I’m basing this out of the time you posted the chapter.

9510860
Central time zone covers a big area dude.

9510860
It was 1:00am ct not mountain time

9510873
Ah I assumed you live in Mountain Time.

Ok um, Wisconsin

9510906
Further South, but you got the right idea, it's on the very edge of the time zone.

9510925
Close. Its one of the states touching it.

9511039
Your going north, bring it back down south

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