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Well I think I'll-- waitaminute...
*zooms in*
>9000+ words

Oh I'm in for a long one....

Hmmm, that artwork looks familiar.

This will be featured. I’d bet my damn life on that. Title alone

Edit: what did i say

"whole reason why I’m dating you"?

Don't you realize this causes your entire scenario to fall apart?

My god man. This was very enjoyable to read. If I may be honest, I quite enjoyed the way you made Starlight act. She probably would be just like that.
A little work on grammar and paragraph structure and I think you're golden :twilightsmile:

Hey, If someone caught me sharping my pork sword I wouldn't even break stride, I would just tell them "Take a picture Mon It'll last longer!"

Heck I'm bold enough to show you all my proudest Fap!

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NO U!
(Warning!: your meme has just evolved!)

UNO!
*WICKED DAB*

seems like funny read but ya might wanna change that cover image. i get the feeling the admen's wont take kindly to it

8798771
That video made me laugh far too much.

8798604
Huh. How so?

8798368
I'm loving these vanilla memes.

Fuck mate. If I keep this up, I might be known as the vanilla writer.

This was an excellent smut between Spike & Starlight, best was well written. Hopefully a sequel with a three way with Twilight happens someday!

8798379
Gave me the dank 'inspiration' bruv.

> ponut
Jesus why is that a thing. I had to do an F3 to see if it was used more than once. Nearly left when I saw it, but made myself check. Really glad I did! That particular word aside, this really resonated with some of the kinks in my head and my own misgivings :'D

How many times am I going to learn a lesson from ponies? I'M A 28 YEAR OLD WOMAN FOR CRYING OUT LOUD.

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AGREED. Especially in the style that the author used!! I would love to see footnote thoughts :'D First time I saw this style of footnotes was in the Bartimaeus trilogy and it was glorious!

HHHHhhhmm that worked out i guess, but in a way I'm slightly dissapointed that it wasn't a longer more meaningfull romance story, I mean where this sex scene happened a bit later.

“Mmmhmm, oh yes.” Spike raised an eyebrow at her response as she began to wiggle her rump a little more. He went to say something, but she had beaten him to it: “Not that your change is a bad thing, whole reason why I’m dating you, but I miss when I could look down at you and clean your cheek with a hoof instead of magic.”

ahhh so they are dating, I wanted to ask why she was suddenly seducing him before I had read that.

Starlight burst into laughter[5].

oh come on starlight don't do that.

“You three wanna fuck together?”

not sure how that was meant, but I don't want Twilight to join them, otherwise I enjoyed this story and hope to either see a story about their dating before and after this scene.

its gonna bother me what artist that pictures from now😖

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It's hard to find them sometimes, especially on Google.

Drat, I only have enough to crowdfund 2.4 million

Soooo.... About that cover image.... My dog asked for the link.... Could you.... yeah know? For my dog....

8801055
Yeah, I'm fucking late. Again. ;_;

GDocs is up to date, now he's just gotta update the actual story.

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My dog thanks thee, fellow brony. May thy clops be plentiful and satisfying.

8801584
Where can I get a dog that watches My Little Pony? Seriously, I want one in my life.

Starlight smiled. “Why you have your penis inside a magazine.”

*Lmfao* :rainbowlaugh:

I believe you mean "Gherkin". No apostrophe at the end either; it's not shortened in any way.

Also, give image credit, please.

8804077
Links to NFSW is against the site rules.

Thanks for the title save tho!

8804274
Crediting isn't the same as linking the image. You could just mention the artist in the description :unsuresweetie:

8803356
It's quite simple actually. First you need to get a bone. Yes, a bone, any bone will do, although the heavier and denser the bone the better the results. After that you must proceed to get yourself a nice and big lunch, you're going to spend a lot of energy in the next steps, so make sure to eat some meat and drink a lot of water; A burger from the Big Kahuna and a Soda will do, unless your girlfriend is vegan, of course, because then, you too is vegan. Now here comes the first tricky step, you must learn to do the Japanese "silly walk" from Mont Python's Ministry of Silly Walks, this is difficult due to the absence of a visual guide, but It can be understood through tough thorough thought, though. After you've learned the "silly walk", you must head out of home, between 3PM and 5PM and turn the first left, make sure to do the "silly walk" only after you are on the streets. After walking for at least 5 minutes, try to look for a non-Euclidean alley, don't worry if you don't know what it looks like, you'll know when you see it. After that you must...

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8805043
I just spent five minutes trying to press that read more button you little troll.:twilightangry2:

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And it works again! :trollestia:

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No no u's! Plus yo granny tranny!!!!

8807206
Ur ur granpap a trap my boI!!
WICKED dAB!

8808691
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Artwork by Frist on Tumblr.

“Now you got it!” Starlight yelled as she turned herself around his grasp, lifting up her rump and allowing him to fuck her doggy style. “Ravage my pussy, fuck me with all you got!”

More like fuck her pony style. :moustache:

You three wanna fuck?
Uh, Starlight, you are one of those three. You can’t ask yourself.

Good story, really sweet, but the constant annotations were really distracting. Half of those details should've been worked into the description more naturally, or just left out altogether because they detract more than they add by their format and inclusion. It seems like a lot of your work suffers from a lack of polish, which is criminally unfair to the quality of writing that you are obviously capable of.
You do good stuff, but I think your work would benefit greatly from just a teeny bit of smoothing out the dents.

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Correct. I'll start editing my stuff from now on.

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