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The Pony of Lost Legend

Smile why you can, no one truly makes it out alive.


Arceus Mort is a young colt, and by the orders of his mother and father...is always guarded by a tall guard named White Fire..At first he hates the treatment but then, he find he just may like it more than he thought...

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 29 )

actually i'm asexual

This looks like fun.

Did you get the story's title from that song from Avenue Q?

I did not. In fact I have no idea what that is, I didn't know what to call it so I just picked the first thing that cam to my head honestly

Avenue Q is like Sesame Street but for adults. Their most famous song is 'The Internet Is For Porn'.
The song that the title is vaguely similar to is 'Everyone's a Little Bit Racist'.

"Arceus get your ass down here,"

Well, we’re off to a flying start aren’t we? First line of the first chapter of this, and we’re already swearing. My kinda story.

Now, I’m sure some people will judge it based entirely on the subject matter, political correctness or some shit, but that doesn’t matter to me. You could write a story about Discord raping Fluffle Puff, and I’d give it a like if it was well written. That being said, I can see this becoming big, I’m already into the matters of suppressed homosexuality. My only issue is that the main character feels like cardboard and I found a not insignificant amount of typos.

just because your high up in Celestia's

being one of those. Supposed to be “you’re”. But I like this story or I wouldn’t be commenting. Good effort, little English slip up, keep going.

see´s title* oh this will be good!

Ah...well...noted? But no, never heard of it till now

You see, I thought that was the right one but you, your and you're always confuse me to death.
It's fixed now though.
Thanks for the feedback :twilightsmile:

Oh man, please keep this up, I love it so far!

Okay, that's fixed. Thanks for catching that for me!

when will the story be off hiatus

I'll look at this later but for now...

Very nice sketch, I take it you did it as well?
I enjoy seeing multiple art forms in one piece.

Edit; Ohhhh, the cliffhangers!

Is this foal con?

Well good, now I can read it

Lol. I promise you no foal con is present. I'm not comfortable writing that kind of story honestly.

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