Garrison 'Gauche-Suede' Varas is the best at what he does, and what he does is repossess and allocate certain capital. Whether he be lining his own pockets or giving to those in need, all Gauche knows is that Equis is ripe and ready for a good stroll
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I don't feel like I can answer that.
Mate, I don't think many people realize how much this site needs more Maud x anyone that isn't Big Mac or in her family.
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I like 'er
* strats - is it strategies? I just want to clarify.
* "Did you just tell me to leave afriend behind?" - missing space. Also, I think "tell" should be in the past tense (told).
* "The only thing he knew how to do was plow fields and eat." - i think it should be like this "The only things he knew how to do was to plow fields and to eat."
* “Bitch, do I look like a tailor?” - could you please explain this? I totally didn't get it. :(
* face first - normally hyphened.
* "The furthest we know anyone’s gotten was the second floor" - once again better to use "got" instead of "gotten" even though it's fine in American English.
* "Hey, if Cleft catches you talking like that, she’ll throw you at the wall" - I seriously am not sure how this supposed to be, but I think it should be "catch you talking".
* ice cold - normally hyphened.
* I didn’t count how many times I stabbed him
* "I wonder (And still do) if it was because of the sheer shock of having Maud wear such skimpy, revealing clothing to bed." - I've tried to rewrite it like this "I've been wondering (and still do) was it due to the sheer shock of having Maud wearing such skimpy, revealing clothing to bed?" since "if it was because of" sounds horribly awkward and "I wonder (and still do)" is in the same tense even though it's not supposed to be. I'm not sure that "wearing" is a proper form there, but it looks like the whole phrase is in the past continuous tense now and "wear" should follow the suit as I understand.
* "She was a good woman, though foalish." - ponified childish? Eenope, clearly should be "foolish".
* "Maud said, her cheeks slightly pinkened." - Well, I know Pinkie is her sister... but I'd say it like this: "Maud told with a slight blush on her cheeks."
Maud (not so slightly) pinkened:
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Goddamn, dude, that's a lotta shit to cover.
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8. Both might be true. Found hyphenated version here: https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/ice-cold and non-hyphenated at Urban Dictionary.
10. What happened there were rather foolish, so I thought Maud would call it like that instead of childish. Hmm, now when I think about it it makes sense, but not because a pony told that. It's just not in Maud's character to use expressive words.
11. It just sounds so strange like that. Works, though.
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Whether you use foalish as childish or foolish, it still works. It's just her Equestrian roots showing in her speech, however
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