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Admiral Q Ponyform


After seeing huge bursts of power from one universe a Q decides to investigate

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I'm going to warn you now: The cover is against fimfiction's NSFW guidelines, with outlined areolas, the outlined clit, and a little of the areolas showing outside of the strap, so it's likely to get taken down soon by a moderator if you don't take it down. And I mean the cover will be taken down, not the story.

Summary shows potential. I'll be keeping track.
Too bad I missed the cover image.

8787780
It was basically a very skinny bikini. I describe it in the story. But i fpund out you can't post any NSFW pics anymore. Even in a rated mature story. Yet they allow incest stories. Go figure

8787963
You can PM NSFW pics.

Speaking of, would you mind PM-ing the ones you were planning on using to me?

8788885
can try. but for this story have the cover art in the AN

I don't know what the original cover image was (please PM me btw, I wanna see it) but with a quick google search, I found some possible options for a cover image you could use.

This one could work, although it's skirting that questionable line a little bit. Not to mention that AJ's appearence here doesn't quite match what you described (a full outfit instead of a bikini and a mask instead of a hat). So you might have to rewrite your description a little if you want to use this one.
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I also found this one. It seems a little bit closer to what you described, but to avoid a contradiction, I would still rewrite the description a little bit.
i.pinimg.com/736x/20/d3/14/20d3140b624f1d20b99b47fd7c07fe79--timber-wolf-werewolf.jpg

I also found a bunch of other serviceable ones, but I wouldn't recommend them unless you're willing to sacrifice the anthro element of this fic.
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derpicdn.net/img/2017/9/21/1540523/thumb.jpeg pre00.deviantart.net/9f9d/th/pre/f/2017/042/8/6/timberjack_by_kilolf-dayqupn.jpg
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I really like this one, but you'd need to crop out flutterbat to make it work.
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8788870
Is it still there, cause I can't see it.
I think the mods got one step ahead of you.

8789255
I one-up the first one.
That's really hot!

8789770
go to sofurry i put the story there and unlike here they don't have stupid rules.

8791764
Sorry to hear about your ban, mate. (And I'm sorry your blog got hijacked by that Chris-Chan wannabe.) I agree you should be allowed to have nsfw covers on mature rated stories, and especially when it's not full on shagging/discharge/etc depicted.
Just don't go into full on crusade mode over it. It's not worth the time and most likely won't change the minds of the highups.

Back at Sweet Apple Acres Applejack's family started to wonder where she was. That wondering soon turned into concern as time past. By sundown they were asking around if anypony had seen her. When nopony had they were freaking out and a town wide search that had no results. Twilight sent a letter to Celestia about Applejack's disappearance. One question on every ponies mind was where was Applejack.

You could easily expand that paragraph into an entire chapter if you added in some dialogue and fleshed out the character dynamics a little.

8899841
I could but right now the focus and main pov is from Applejack's pov.

8899849
That's called the "first person" perspective. It is a valid style of story telling (think of "The Hunger Games") but if you use that format, this extra paragraph at the end briefly describing what's going through other characters heads doesn't fit. The whole point of writing in first person is that the audience discovers everything with the character while that last paragraph is closer to the "third person omniscient" perspective (describing anyone, anywhere, any time.) You can use whatever perspective format you want but pick one and stick to it. Generally, flipping between formats tends to look sloppy. I'm not saying it isn't possible to pull it off effectively, but accomplishing such a feat would require a very skilled writer.

8899977
I felt it was nessecary for this part. her disaappearance would be noticed. Will I do this through out the story? No but here I did.

8900040
You could still portray that same information without switching perspectives. Just delay the reveal until later on when they actually find Applejack. That way, not only will you have reader's guessing about everypony else's reaction (keeping some suspense (that's a good thing)) but when they do find AJ, you might even be able to work in some feels where everyone's relieved to find her . . . yet she doesn't recognize them. That's what I would have done anyway.

8903151
Trust me thete will be shocks and such. We won't here from them again till later.

9641768
your welcome looking forward to the next chapter.

I followed you for a reason and this ain't it chief.

9641802
My other stories are being worked on. Not going to make hits with every story. But why you have a problem with this one and what's your favorite?

I'm not really a fan of anthro stuff, but that was an interesting idea.

Not bad, an interesting an idea to say the least

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