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P-Berry


Life is what you make of it. Enjoy it as long as you can, for you never know when it could be over.

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Despite being a mere five years old, Princess Flurry Heart has already made it to founder and CEO of her own multinational company.

No, really.


Credit for the cover that has inspired this whole thing goes to Glimglam.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 25 )

Oh my gosh I loved it: :D

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jz1 #3 · Mar 6th, 2018 · · ·

I do want to see more of this.

This needs a sequel

I love it:raritystarry it adorable I give it a 💯:moustache:: please do the sequel:twilightsmile:

For as 'forced cute' the baby is
The fandom seems to turn it around xD

This is so out there... I love it :rainbowlaugh:
A random tag well-deserved.
Thanks for making me laugh, berry senpai!

So...what exactly did you have in mind for what the angry japanese stallion was saying in english exactly? Google translate worked a bit for the first 2 lines that Flurry said but not for the business partner.

Needs to be continued. I expect more chapters…

holy shit that was the best thing i've read all day...

I was NOT ready for this. How is it possible? All ehat I know says otherwise...




HOW IN THE WORLD COULD SHINING ARMOR NOT KNOW WHO IS VADER!! THAT GUY PLAYED D&D IN HIGHSCHOOL, AND HAS AN ENTIRE COLECTION OF COMICS!!

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Obviously, not being involved with international business means he is not up to date on Amareican pop culture.

Flurry Heart, Princess of BISNEYSS

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all i got was

"how do/could you say that?"
"Do/have you no good?"

for the last lines but I am sure they aren't supposed to be like that

Whew, lotsa comments in just 24 hours.
Well, I'm glad people enjoyed this piece of randomness. This was the first time a story has gone from idea, to WIP, to finished and uploaded in less than 24 hours, so I'm glad people like how it came out.
That said...
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Honestly, I'm not even sure myself anymore. I think it was "Why did you just hang up?" and "Are you not interested in making business anymore?" Or something along those lines, but don't quote me on that.
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I'm glad you guys enjoyed it, but I wouldn't get my hopes up for another chapter. This was fun to write, but randomness like this tends to get stale (and less fun to write) pretty quickly. I'm grateful for all the positive feedback this silly idea has received, but I think it would be overstaying its welcome, so to speak, with a continuation, so I suppose it's better to leave it as the silly one-shot it is right now instead of forcing a second chapter.

Wow. Way better than I anticipated - kudos on a great story! Just the right amount of crack to be enjoyable, not overblown.

I get the feeling Shining would be a stallion to recognize a bit of Japanese/Japaneighse/Neighponese/Inset pony equivalent to Japan here. He played the pony version of D&D, he's probably the pony version of a light otaku.

... Fund it.

So thanks for that.

“Not very cash money of you, Armor.” she said reprimandingly, “Not very cash money.”

Flurry: "You are leaving me no choice: You're fired."

Reminds me of the "princess cromartie heart" tag on derpi...

Though this is a comedy. I do see flurry growing up to have genius level intellect at a young age

Two years later the Castle in the Crystsl Empire is renamed Flurry Tower.

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yup, in flurry of Emotion, she showed much more self-awareness than the cake Twins, even though theyre over a year older than her. She tried to solve the Problems herself, (albeit not Always successfully) like Splitting the toy in half to get the two others to stop Fighting, she even tried to get Twi and Spike to help first. The cake Twins at her age did practically Nothing but cry, untill someone else made the Problem go away.

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Yeah, she’s also smart enough to understand Twilight’s apology at the end. So they she may not understand the words, she can read the emotional side behind it

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