im waiting for my five thousand words of fame

My poor, innocent Peachy... You're a monster, Headless. You should be ashamed of what you did to that filly.

Now I've gotta do something even worse to her. You made me do this.

TBH I can't finish this. You do a VERY good job of writing and that's no bash of your... skill... but FUCK were you right to spoiler the fuck outta this. Jesus

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Well if you like the writing but not how extreme it gets, you might like a fic coming up that happens in the same world as this. Though that one will be on my Crimson Prose account since I only put my really extreme stuff here now.

Hm I understand the need of the plot... but a knife straight in the back when he doesn't expect it would be quite effective in removing the damn bastard and definitely faster... ^^;;;

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Probably, but repeated trauma does have a way of making someone afraid to resist.

Also thanks for the corrections again