• Member Since 7th Feb, 2012
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Alex Warlorn


Just your average Brony who happened upon an idea that might actually turn out to be clever enough for guys to love.

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Gather around little pony, there is a spine tingling tale inspired directly by The Colour Out of Space by HP Lovecraft, a meteor lands in Ponyville, except none can agree what it looks like, and soon that isn't all that can't agree on. Do you have the guts to read this dive into the unknown and the incomprehensible? Anything can be taken too far, that includes uniqueness!

Cover art by V-K-D https://v-d-k.deviantart.com/art/Derpys-final-showdown-296651442

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Comments ( 17 )

Glimmer does an oddly good job of telling scary stories.

I remember reading the version of this on DeviantArt before. And, I dare say this story is more frightening the second time.

Well done.

Starlight definitely did the horror story teller right. Plus for some reason it seems like something she would be good at.

Well now... this was just perfect.

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Happy that it entertained ya dude.

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Ya think so? Heh!


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I'm surprised, I sincerely didn't change much, thank you all the same! :-)

THANK YOU ALL FOR COMMENTING!

That was pretty good :)

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Starlight is Best Pony.

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That isn't how you spell Trixie nor Minty nor Clover nor Shady.

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Oops, I meant to spell "SunShim". My bad.

"All she found of Discord was a letter with his paw print near the tree, written with symbols Derpy had never seen, covered in tear stains.

Rough translation: "I didn't know! I bought it from a bubble of space-time in a Carcosan bazaar, just like my throw rug! I was going to use it as a paperweight!"

In any case, wonderfully unsettling tale, and a perfect teller for it. Thanks for the chills, even if Best Pony never did charge a killer muffin with sword in hooves.

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Rough translation: "I didn't know! I bought it from a bubble of space-time in a Carcosan bazaar, just like my throw rug! I was going to use it as a paperweight!"

Interesting thought!

In any case, wonderfully unsettling tale, and a perfect teller for it. Thanks for the chills,

I'm just bloody happy to see you actually READ SOMETHING OF MINE AGAIN! THANK YOU!!!!

even if Best Pony never did charge a killer muffin with sword in hooves.

I asked artists if I could use their art for the cover, and this was the artist who responded first. And I was worried none of the artists would respond (ironically, most did. Oops. But it would be dishonorable to change it now.)

Super interesting! Surreal horror is always so much more uncomfortable to me.

I admit being a tad disappointed that it was just a story, but that's just preference

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That was due to the original format of how the story was written (ponies taking turns telling ghost stories) but a wrap up was never written, so I posted my own entry on its own.

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That line by Discord could be a story unto itself!

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"What, my average shopping trip? Maybe on Black Friday. Pretty sure that's how Ragnarok gets started in some timelines."

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Not really the end of the world, but an insanely major change to it.

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