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Michael Hudson
Original Works. It was a good run.
Michael Hudson
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Nothing like a good clop without:
8762211 I honestly don't know if I would call this angry sex, though I'm not against this principle.
Edit: And I misread. My bad.
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Dunno, seems like there's a bit of anger at the world.
Very erotic, and to the point. Damned well-written and sexy. :D And even better, I can see Twilight and Spike doing this.
De-stress sex.
I don't know what's worse: virgins writing about sex, or squeakers writing military fiction.
This was good. Some transitions missing to match possitions. But I liked that it was straight to the point I feel I would have been a little confused had I not read the summary.
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Squeakers?
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Kids.
You're a mammal, Spike is a reptile. I doubt you're compatible.
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*cough* Kirins *cough*
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Just a bit ignorant in terminology.
It was good, a bit rough around the edges and the transitions felt a bit odd, but good nonetheless.
8762952
Wrong. Dragons are not reptiles. Dragons are dragons and have no relation whatsoever to any reptile species. (and Dragons have the fame of being... highly virile/fertile regarding themselves and other species. )
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Dragons are closer to reptiles than mammals. Scales, forked tongue, slitted pupils, no hair, save for when Twilight cast a stache spell, they're fantasy reptiles.
Honestly, this was not to my liking. The one sentence paragraphs varied in length too much to create any sense of rhythm, so it did not give it a musical or poetic feel. At the same time, the constant switching back and forth between the two characters and their perspective became immersion breaking to me. It also led to limitations of descriptions in what Spike and Twilight saw and felt.
8764285 And I entirely get that. It was an experimental decision I made for this one, and I didn't expect it to be for everyone. In fact, I'm surprised it has done as well as it has so far.
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I thought it was amazing personally. I can't say I'd like to see it in a, "full length," story, but for a short story I think it works great. It has a very unique feel, but it's well written and seems clearly well thought through. In 1.2k words doing one sentence character swaps you managed to perfectly convey two characters feelings and actions in this nightly ritual to keep themselves, well... sane. I find more and more I rarely get to say this, but I'm thrilled I get the opportunity now, I am impressed.
It's a shame you haven't done a larger story that could draw my attention from my current things to read/things to write/things to do as I'd really like to see what you can do with a larger word count and a actual consistent story.
8765096 My main suggestions on such things are too check out my original works, especially if you're looking for smut to be involved, as keeping a consistent and meaningful clopfic on this site has not been my strongsuit in the past.
Still, I'm happy that you were able to enjoy it so much, and welcome the praise.
There needs to be more Twispike anthro stories. Good chemistry and they have the best set-ups in stories.