Two things.
One. Short chapter...
Two. This story needs more recognition!

Its OK. Storywise. Tho the constant POV flip-flop gets tiresome.

Will keep liking it so long as you don't take too long to update and definitely do NOT abandon it.

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Ha! No kidding. Well I defiantly do not plan on abandoning it at all, I have the majority of the stories major points planed out already. My big issues are writing the smaller "filler" chapters where there is just info and such being passed. That said I'm actually working on the next chapter now but no idea when it will be out and I've been working on re-writing the earlier chapters when I have issues working on the next chapters so hopefully it won't be as long as the last wait was.

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So long as they keep coming man, this was a nice idea.

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One year later.

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Two years later

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Lmao

Hey, love the story but is it ever going to get an update?

Wow Twilight was being both a bitch and an asskisser! That’s a fairly new low for her!

so when will the next chapter come out?

Update?

It's been 3 years since an update and 11 days since you were on the site, you ok bro?

Hope this gets a new chapter soon

La etiqueta de sexo parece inútil.