Spike and Trixie spike the punch at a party so they can get it on with their crushes, but use too much. The overdose causes those that drink it to engage in erotic, grotesque murder with one another.
I was hoping for Spike to last a bit longer but like usual, he gets murder too quickly. he could have probably changed rapidly when drinking the punch and eating Rarity's flesh by making him bigger and deadlier, but losing some of his intelligence but becoming Twilight's literal Guard/obedient/Lustful dog.
I think the reason I don’t quite like this fic as much as your others is because everyone is consenting to the brutal murder and sex (it’s not rape). Still, it’s long enough to allow me to jack off a couple of times. So I’ll still call it a win.
There is no way Spike is 9. He hits puberty in Season 8 and he was born when Twi was at most 7. He's at least 12.
Also, I felt this has a bit too much going on in this chapter, creating long stretches between what happens with a character. It probably would've worked better to have Rainbow and AJ just watching for a while and taunting each other while the rest screw.
It's also a bit odd there's all this cum-filling and anal and shitting going on without even a hint of farting.
9455307 There is also no way he'd spike the punch to bone Rarity, so it's surprising his age was the largest problem. However yeah it is paced weird and the lack of farting is strange come to think of it. I'll keep that in mind.
“So glad to have helped you, my love,” Trixie somehow stammered between thrusts when Starlight’s cock pulled to the back of her throat. She coiled her tongue to slide over Starlight’s shaft with each pass, gagging around it, wanting to pleasure her lover and killer in every way imaginable.
As Twilight came, Spike’s skull caved, his two favorite lovers ending his live as spectacularly as the little dragon deserved.
"Live?" Anyway, Spike's death really got me in the heartstrings this time. I clap for you, headless_rainbow, usually your fanfics make me feel either a tad grossed out or very intrigued, but this time I feel like I might cry. Just two tears, maybe three, in honor of our Spikey Wikey.
I was hoping for Spike to last a bit longer but like usual, he gets murder too quickly. he could have probably changed rapidly when drinking the punch and eating Rarity's flesh by making him bigger and deadlier, but losing some of his intelligence but becoming Twilight's literal Guard/obedient/Lustful dog.
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That might be a bit too much like what he did in 'Spikey Wikey'. I mean aside from him murdering Twilight in that instead of guarding her.
welp, my mind feels violated
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I don't mind feeling violated
I think the reason I don’t quite like this fic as much as your others is because everyone is consenting to the brutal murder and sex (it’s not rape). Still, it’s long enough to allow me to jack off a couple of times. So I’ll still call it a win.
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I was trying something different!
wow, I wasn't really expecting most of that chapter, but it's good so far.
Ah, hah hah, I, as an intellectual, get this refrence.
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There is no way Spike is 9. He hits puberty in Season 8 and he was born when Twi was at most 7. He's at least 12.
Also, I felt this has a bit too much going on in this chapter, creating long stretches between what happens with a character. It probably would've worked better to have Rainbow and AJ just watching for a while and taunting each other while the rest screw.
It's also a bit odd there's all this cum-filling and anal and shitting going on without even a hint of farting.
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There is also no way he'd spike the punch to bone Rarity, so it's surprising his age was the largest problem.
However yeah it is paced weird and the lack of farting is strange come to think of it. I'll keep that in mind.
I couldn't finish it.
"Live?"
Anyway, Spike's death really got me in the heartstrings this time. I clap for you, headless_rainbow, usually your fanfics make me feel either a tad grossed out or very intrigued, but this time I feel like I might cry. Just two tears, maybe three, in honor of our Spikey Wikey.