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Great story and its totally what dash thinks it is
Hilarious ending!!! Want a sequel!!!
Hi There, just read your story and I got to say I liked it! and the smut was pretty good too, however, I did see quite a few errors and I thought that I would help out and help correct them for you!
That should be Italicised to show that he is speaking to himself.
Wind? Probably should put a y and should be good :3
Again you should make it Italicised in order to show that he is speaking to himself.
Forgot the quotation marks at the end of the first sentence and the front in the other sentence.
Needs a space at the comma
Needs to be Italicised
Italicised
Italicised
Everstallion? I think you mean Every Stallion
Forgot a quotation mark.
Italicised
Italicised
Forgot Quotation Marks
Misspelled Zephyr’s Name
Accidently added a quotation mark
Forgot Quotation Marks
Did you mean “Wait Rainbow! it’s not what you think”?
Now I’m not good at writing stories myself but I hope I helped you out on some of the errors in this story btw still great story! keep it up! Hope this helps.
I wonder how will rainbow dash react
There should be a sequel
This was pretty funny. Though you should really credit the artist for the cover art you're using.
Already saw the title and I'm already uninterested. That's enough FIMFiction for today.
If you can’t f*ck the daughter, then f*ck the mother.