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MinuetteColgate


I seem to have one job in life. Failing my one job in life.

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What's the one thing you never expect to happen. Get famous? Get rich? Get powerful? How about getting sent to a magical TV land, with a new body and powers to go with it, and then getting stoned for doing the right thing merely because your powers are dark? So hi, my name is now Oleander, and I have a calamity to stop.

I just got Them's Fighting Herds and really loved the character of Oleander, and since I have been reading displaced fics recently, I might try at one of them. Though I don't know whether this will turn into a normal story among the way, but just with the displaced background.

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Comments ( 14 )

I...can't tell if you're savaging this awful "genre" through parody, or it's just another clone.

this could be a little bit better.

you committed the same mistake that a lot of writers do in displaced stories, the character continues acting as an immature(?) teenager after thousands of years of existence

but I'll give you the benefit of doubt and watch the story for now

I love it! Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!

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This is pretty good for a first chapter (despite a 'few' errors).

“JOOOOOOOOJOOOOOOOO!” I sang out, mentally, finishing the 2015610th song I had been singing. If you couldn’t tell, it was ‘Sono Chi No Sadame' from JoJo’s Bizarre Adventure. I loved that show. Shame I’ll never get to finish it. Getting stuck in stone, looking out across a decorative garden, for a millennia can do that. Or has it been longer? I honestly have trouble remembering, which is funny, because thanks to The Book Of Undying Misery, my memory tends to be…well…Undying. OK. That was a bad pun. I am sorry. Except I’m not.

And from the first fucking word you already have me.

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Oh? So you're approaching me?

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Need to get closer to track your story..!

Continued? :duck:

I cannot wait to see where you take this story

Huh. Interesting too bad just one chapter

Hope to see this continued someday.

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