What's the one thing you never expect to happen. Get famous? Get rich? Get powerful? How about getting sent to a magical TV land, with a new body and powers to go with it, and then getting stoned for doing the right thing merely because your powers are dark? So hi, my name is now Oleander, and I have a calamity to stop.
I just got Them's Fighting Herds and really loved the character of Oleander, and since I have been reading displaced fics recently, I might try at one of them. Though I don't know whether this will turn into a normal story among the way, but just with the displaced background.
I...can't tell if you're savaging this awful "genre" through parody, or it's just another clone.
this could be a little bit better.
you committed the same mistake that a lot of writers do in displaced stories, the character continues acting as an immature(?) teenager after thousands of years of existence
but I'll give you the benefit of doubt and watch the story for now
I love it! Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!
TRANSVERSE
This is pretty good for a first chapter (despite a 'few' errors).
And from the first fucking word you already have me.
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Oh? So you're approaching me?
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Need to get closer to track your story..!
Continued?
I cannot wait to see where you take this story
Huh. Interesting too bad just one chapter
Hope to see this continued someday.