• Member Since 11th Jan, 2014
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devilman


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A colt and a pegasus find themselves alone on a highway. It's strangely quiet, isn't it?


An apocalypse story that isn't zombies.

The description updates along with the story.

Cover art by myself.

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 5 )

The story is off to an interesting start, but the thing that stands out the most right now is the adorable artwork of the main character you did for the cover!

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aah, thank you for the kind words! :heart:

Interesting. Might want to put a bit more into each chapter, but that's just a personal nitpick. I'd like to see where you take this. I don't know if your intent with the organs was to avoid talking about them very descriptively due to the character's age/innocence, but if you're going to really emphasize how horrible it is to see the mangled corpses of your friendos then you might want to go a bit more in-depth.

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

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oh man, thats a hard question to answer, haha

i think ray would sound something like zac efron ( aka ted from the lorax ) - sarcastic and a hint of being full of himself

frankie is younger then the cmc - totally nicky jones ( aka chowder and my favorite scene)

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