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[He/Him] Just a writer who likes MLP and hopes to make a living off it: https://ko-fi.com/ink_hoof

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When Chrysalis, former queen of the changelings, is finally found, it seems something strange has happened to her. The once proud and noble queen now has cats. A lot of cats.

(An idea based off of a brief conversation with YuGiOh Brony in the comments of A Changeling at the Breakfast Table. However, the two stories are in no way connected. So while I might encourage others to read it as a way to shamelessly plug myself, there is no need to in order to enjoy this story.)

(Now with a dramatic reading: here)

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Trixie's horn lit up brighter. A red dot appeared on the floor, moving across it. As it did, the cats began to take notice. One by one, they began to chase after it, their paws smacking down on the floor where it was as they tried to catch it. With a wicked grin, Trixie made a circle around Chrysalis, getting all the cats to follow it.

I'm starting to think you might still be evil.

Of course crickets, of course!

Flurry Heart can whip Chrysalis' flank in seconds.

That Picture o.o must have moar!
Artist!?

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If you mean the cover art, there's a source button attached, and it shows it as Pusspuss (largely nsfw though)
If you mean the comic at the bottom, the derpibooru link as the bottom is clickable, and it's by Jargon Scott

"And since we're talking about it, don't think for one moment that I don't know about the laundry and toilet paper."

"Trixie is offended at the accusation! She would never steal your laundry or wash her toilet paper at your castle!"

Uhhhhhh...no. No, I'm not even gonna ask. :rainbowlaugh:

Poor Chryssie. :< Hopefully, she'll have her revenge.

Or at least she'll get to mooch off Twilight.

This is a rather funny short story. :-D Great job on the exchanges, characterizations, humor and wrap-up. And yeah, I LOVED Phar's inner thoughts during the hunt and that was pretty clever work on Trixie's part with the pointer pen. :-D I mean, the fact that they were able to beat Chrysalis without hurting the cats was great. Yeah, they COULD have easily taken the cats, but Fluttershy would have probably ended up getting peeved (excuse my language) about them hurting semi-innocent animals. :-D

Anyway, splendid job on this story as I aforementioned. :-D I'll definitely be looking forward to more of your work (especially your Shinyverse and "Rainbow Unicorn" universe stories), but I will definitely respect that you have a life outside the computer room and real world matters need to take top priority.

"Now, now," Trixie said with a smirk. "There's no need to be so catty ."

He moved as quick as he could, while keeping the pace slow enough for the other ponies to keep up. It would be a lot faster, but considering only one of the others with him could do so, it would either mean leaving them behind completely, or going ahead and waiting for them to catch up.

Missing a sentence or reference to flight in there?

The story kinda ended abruptly. Wanted more.

"LIES!" Trixie shouted. "Lies and hearsay! There is no evidence Trixie has ever done such a thing, Sparkle!"

I read heresy xD

There is no 'sigh' long enough to describe how i feel about it..............

She would never steal your laundry or wash her toilet paper at your castle!"

:rainbowderp:... isn't is the other way around?

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The idea is that technically she's telling the truth. She would never steal Twilight's laundry or wash her toilet paper. However, Trixie would do her laundry while at the castle, and steal Twilight's toilet paper to use when she's on the road. So, she technically told the truth, and if in the confusion somepony misunderstood, that's not Trixie's fault.

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And even if it was...it's not like Trixie's ever going to own up to it anyway. :rainbowlaugh:

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Ah, clever little magus.

When he thought about it like that, maybe it was better that the ponies had somehow managed to win.

I suggest a new strategy, Chrysalis. Let the pony win.

These comedy oneshots always end in a punchline that just leave us wanting more, but most of the time we never see a continuation thanks to the nature of the oneshot.

I have a better strategy, Chrysalis. Let the kitten win.

I quite like this story, it's pretty nice. :twilightsmile:

I see what you did there chrysalis.
just wait another 40 years and you'll be able to collect

in teh case of the cats wouldn't be "Face-Pawed" *rim shots*

Two ponies, two changelings, and thirteen cats all face-palmed.

Technically they have frogs, not palms. So they're frog-faced! :V

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