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tflex


I know, I know my avatar doesn't match my name, but come to think of it who's does?

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Join your Anon self as you avoid Yandere Scootaloo? and maintain a forced-ish relationship with the nicest girl in the Equestria girl's universe.

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Comment posted by tflex deleted Feb 25th, 2018

This is terrible

The story could use some work. I have no idea what the story was about and it didn't really have much plot. Try getting someone to edit it

tflex #4 · Feb 25th, 2018 · · 2 ·

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That was the point...

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The point was to write something random immediately it came to mind, basically integrating every idea somehow into the story.

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I don't mind stories being random but this story almost reached to the point of not making any sense. Here is a piece of advice. When writing something random, make sure the story is random but the story flows and makes sense. I don't know really. I'm not good with writing according to the fanfics I wrote here.

Alright, hang on, dear Author, how old is Anon? I have to ask for... reasons.

I just wonder what on earth is going on...

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