A Jedi Master and his loyal Clone troopers sucessfully escape Order 66 and the Empire. After jumping into the Unknown Regions, they discover their safe haven to live out their lives...Equestria. Set after Revenge of the Sith and the Clone Wars.
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I look forward to seeing where you go with this...
Awesome
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Glad to hear it!
No offense.. but dude, just no....
Seriously, why do you keep making more and more fics when you haven't even come close to finishing the half a dozen of your previous ones...
I can't see things ending any other way than for your fics just being put in a yellow deadlock of incomplete status....
I just don't get it... why? just tell me why do you keep adding new ones?... did you run out of inspiration for the other fics? or what is it?...
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8758389 I get new ideas and I want to work on them as soon as I can. I know I have a backlog of stories, but bear with me. It's how I roll with my writing. Inspiration comes and goes, and I can hardly ignore it. It sort of reminds me to keep writing, to not let those stories die, if you know what I mean.
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Then why not write on paper? At least then you won’t spam your page with dozens of stories.
8758525 Problem is, I can rarely express my ideas as good on paper as I can here. It's wierd, but that's how I roll. I'm currently deciding to get rid of a few stories, mostly ones I've completely lost interest in.
But these are one you won't miss. That's a promise.
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Personality I can’t really agree but if that’s how you roll, then more power to you. It’s just a friendly suggestion.
8758534 I like friendly suggestions. I'll try to get some things down on paper.
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Cool man, best of luck.
That what I like to see clone who didn't get the order and still works with the Jedi great work can't wait for the next chapter
Interesting premise, not only is it about a Jedi in Equestria, but to see a story where a clone soldier refuses to follow order 66 and accompanies said Jedi on their adventures makes for a lot of opportunities in the story, also it fits with the theme of friendship.
Will definitely read and i wish the author a lovely day
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Do you not have a computer to write your stories on? I have a folder on mine with many stories I started and either lost interest in or the idea didn't pan out to be as interesting as I had hoped.
8759105 I do.
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Then, why would you do better writing online than in a word processor on your computer?
Myself, I can't write on paper as it is far too slow for my thoughts. I end up with badly written notes instead of actual sentences (you know missing things like verbs, adjectives, nouns, etc.)
8759224 It's how I work. I like using the computer more than on paper.
I'm very interested, let's see where this story goes.
Squeeeeeeeeeee! yay
This holds promise.
Enjoyable start though the wording structure in some of the paragraphs sound weird or redundant when said out loud.
The story itself is interesting and holds my interest.
maybe you could add a few splinter groups of clones still loyal to their jedi generals into the mix as well?
I mean surly the 389th aren't the only clones who disobeyed order 66 right?
great story so far keep it up plz.
huh, decent work, but the clones feel extremely forced, i understand they know next to nothing outside of what they are trained for on Kamino, but they still managed to develop personalities and like able traits throughout the Clone Wars TV show-that said, Rest In Peace Domino Squad.
Otherwise, good work, it's been awhile since i've read a good mlp/star wars fic, (and there all either cancelled or on a permanent hiatus(because the authors up and vanish inexplicably)) that includes a good plot, pacing, and readable grammar, and so far this story fits those categories adequately.
Ensign set course to Earth.
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no set a course for sector 001
I would say that this Clone Commander didn't get triggered almost immediately after the order 66.
This doesn't really make any sense. The storm blocking out communications I can understand, but the trasmission came from Coruscant, from the Jedi Temple that Obi Wan and Yoda reprogrammed to change from a baiting distress call to a warning. They did not do it from their own hiding spot. If the clone ship can track it, so can the empire, so it's a suicidal thing to do.
Also, not sure why they trust the clones when they have no idea what cause them to blindly obey the order, the chip investigation was covered up so they don't know that was causing it. If they did they would order all clones to have their chips removed, the clones would gladly do so than be brainwashed.
At least tell them that the sith had brainwash their fellow clones and they're looking into it. Having all communications blocked to prevent the order from reaching would bring distrust and worry, not only acceptance. That's assuming they didn't already called out back to the Republic once they were out of the storm and avoided getting the order anyway. Bad intro aside, the connection between the ponies and the Jedi seems interesting, we'll see how it goes.
I like this, but I'm gonna be honest: a solar storm being the reason these clones didn't receive Order 66 seems rather convenient. I mean, I buy it, but still :P
I'm glad I waited until an update, this is an exciting read!
Maybe they had there chips removed perhaps?