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Autumn Jade


YouTuber - VA - Writer - Singer I love making new friends and spending my time in the performing arts.

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Bullying is something Fluttershy has always dealt with. Whether it was in the form of abuse from her father, girls at school or the way she thought about herself. All these things eventually led to her gaining the Bulimia Disorder, and it's up to her friends and girlfriend to help her before things get out of hand.

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I like this...a lovely little short story! my only gripe is that there is no "s" in adagio's name lol

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Oh...whoops XD Well thanks for letting me know! (yeah I can't spell to save my life...)

Can you continue this story with a epilgue sure confronting the Dazzlings can be tough but Twilight can make them knwo oen thing.
If fluttershy died from their bullying...she make them beg to been sent to Tatarus.

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I will certainly think about it. :)

Comment posted by Midnight Ambassador deleted Feb 22nd, 2018

That's pretty good. I also like the idea of The Dazzling's returning to Canterlot High as bullies without their magic, but seriously; picking on Fluttershy for any reason at all is a crime in itself. Let's be honest, Fluttershy is the weakest out of the EqG Main 7, but she does have determination and confidence, plus a heart that is very sensitive, but also brave and full of spirit. So anybody who decides to bully her is just a big coward, because she's the weakest. :ajbemused: Still, hope to hear more from you, maybe do a sequeal where Twilight and Fluttershy deal with the whole situation. :pinkiesmile:

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I'm considering doing a sequel, yes. I do agree with that too, I actually almost made this story a SciSet story, but I felt like this situation would fit Fluttershy better.

Honestly, the one thing I want to downvote is the refusal to have Sci Twi be here. Between the two of them, she and Pirncess Twilight can work out a way that bennifits all the girls and not have one not be there.

Only way this works as is is too redo when this is set to before the Friendship Games so that they don't know her yet.

Comment posted by Dragonlord_ember_fanboy deleted Nov 16th, 2018
Comment posted by Autumn Jade deleted Nov 16th, 2018

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Me too! :pinkiegasp:try not to let get on your skin:fluttercry:

This is well-written.

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