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Alternate ending to "Forgotten Friendship". The Memory Stone has been destroyed and everyone's memories have been restored. Except for Sunset Shimmer's.

Now, teams on both sides of the portal must work together to discover what happened to Sunset's memories, where they went, and how to get them back.

Other character tags include: Moondancer, Princess Celestia, Sunburst, Trixie (EqG).

Chapters (7)
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Interesting

Would love to see where this goes

“What I'm trying to say is: I may not be able to fix this.” She looked ahead with a brokenhearted sigh. “And the Sunset Shimmer we have come to know and love is gone.”

Hopefully she can.
I like this story so far.

Good story, I'm so anxious to see where it goes.

I hope princess Twilight can restore Sunset memories, she got so far, and if she lose all their memories, all that she learned and most important of all, her friends, just isn't fair.

I'm loving the story and for my vote, I'd say every other day. I can't wait to see more. Have a 👍 and a 🌮

Good so far. Will also be interested to see where it goes.

Once a week is a good release cycle for those who check FIMFic once a week. There's no rush to get them all up sooner. Those that really like it will keep checking back and get used to the schedule. It'll be less pressure on you too.

So I know its a bit early to tell, but it looks like Wallflower Blush won't figure through much of the story until the end. I was never satisfied with the quick pace of her turnaround, but what can you do in the span of one t.v. special, lol? It would be a bit of a disappointment to see Sunset lose everything she gained from all the hard work she's put in towards her redemption. I wonder too if in her reverting back to years prior, will she return back to the evil, arrogantly, power-hungry pony she was before? Will be fun to stick around and find out.

This story is so amazing! :heart:

THIS STORY IS GREAT

thoe you are forgetting one very important character

ray her pet thats kinda something that does need to be addressed

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What?! Tacos? and it's not even Tuesday!

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So I know its a bit early to tell, but it looks like Wallflower Blush won't figure through much of the story until the end. I was never satisfied with the quick pace of her turnaround, but what can you do in the span of one t.v. special, lol?

Her turnaround wasn't nearly as bad as others (ie. last week's special).

It would be a bit of a disappointment to see Sunset lose everything she gained from all the hard work she's put in towards her redemption. I wonder too if in her reverting back to years prior, will she return back to the evil, arrogantly, power-hungry pony she was before? Will be fun to stick around and find out.

You do just that :raritywink:

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Can't forget Ray!

I was kinda sad not to see him, or even a tank for him, in the special. Maybe, he's on the far wall. We've only really seen Sunset's apartment from one angle.

He won't appear here, but does get mentioned.

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I both like and dislike this story. The plot is gold, my issue is this, he memories are gone, but personality and emotions are seperate, to me, she should still be her kind self, she would remember being Celetia's student and how she was nasty but the personality and emotions she gained would stay

Well this was odd. I'm rather sure this is the first time I have ever rooted for Starlight in any confrontation with Sunset.

I'm really not sure how she is going to deal with not being the smartest and, possibly, the most powerful mare in the room with Twi and Starlight.

When and if Sunset gets her memories back she is going to be so upset with herself.

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Im not 100% sure, but I thank personality and emotions are tied to experiences, which are memories. It’s why Alzheimer’s patients are so different from their normal selves.

Couple of curios things. First is why sunset didn’t react to twilight being an alicorn. From the time of her memories there ir should only be two alicorns. Second is the reasoning behind not telling sunset she lost her memories. She will figure it out eventually unless they plan to keep her prisoner for life with no acces to newspapers or calendars and when she does she will feel lied to and betrayed (and she’d sorta be right). Would like to know their reasoning for not being upfront about it.

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Couple of curios things. First is why sunset didn’t react to twilight being an alicorn. From the time of her memories there ir should only be two alicorns.

That will be touched upon next chapter.

Second is the reasoning behind not telling sunset she lost her memories. She will figure it out eventually unless they plan to keep her prisoner for life with no acces to newspapers or calendars and when she does she will feel lied to and betrayed (and she’d sorta be right). Would like to know their reasoning for not being upfront about it.

Because the plot demands it! (jk lol!) No, Celestia is just trying to be gentle with Sunset. She either doesn't know how Sunset would handle the news, or knows she can't handle the news. This is also only meant to be a short-term solution. Just to buy them enough time to prepare what they're going to say to Sunset and set her up to receive whatever help she needs.

Is it the wrong thing to do? Probably.

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I'm rather sure this is the first time I have ever rooted for Starlight in any confrontation with Sunset.

What? Not a Starlight fan? It's okay, I usually cheer for Sunset, myself.

Yes, Sunset will have a lot of apologizing to do if/when this is all done.

i have some issues here

1. hiding things from sunset is wrong she should be told the truth about things

2. sunset not knowing well it removes all the drama potential of sunset feeling lost in her own life

3. while going to eqeustria makes sense it cuts out the impact things have on her actual friends

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1. hiding things from sunset is wrong she should be told the truth about things

Should she? I'm not disagreeing or agreeing, but, we don't always do the right thing. Or, sometimes, we do the wrong thing, thinking it's the right thing.

2. sunset not knowing well it removes all the drama potential of sunset feeling lost in her own life

Possibly... But, I feel I can't write that without having all the characters brooding (and no one wants to read that).

3. while going to eqeustria makes sense it cuts out the impact things have on her actual friends

We may have to wait and see on that one...

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you do have this tagged as a drama and here is another issue by not telling her its basically trying to sweep her entire life under the rug so celesstia can play pretend

I can’t wait to see the part where Starlight either blows some shit up or does some super complex spell work and sunset is forced to eat her words

"I don't know. All I do know is Sunset is not the Sunset we know. And, right now, Celestia is the only pony who knows Sunset best. Until I have reason to do so otherwise, I will trust her judgement in this matter."

And how well did Celestias method turn out the first time?

“I'd like to bring Starburst and Moondancer in on this, if you'll let me. Both of them are fluent in Old Ponish and enjoy a good puzzle.”

Should be Sunburst. Why not give it to Sunset to solve? She is the one who figured out it was a code to begin with.

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