All the fillies say i'm pretty fly for a white guy.
After a long-due day off, Starlight gets to join Trixie on a best friends day out. Unfortunately Trixie's sour mood causes Starlight to worry, and a chain of events unexpectedly pulls them closer. Starlight plays good friend(tm) but begins to realize there may be something else she's feeling.
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I love this fic!! Good job so far!!
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aww glad you like it!! i'm having fun writing it ^^
Good :3
Interesting story so far. Worth a watch at least
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thank you so much!! i'm glad you're enjoying it ^^
lol it all goes badly, but at least her mane looks good
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exactly!
Why did you make the chapters so short?
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I'm not quite sure actually ;;, I think it's maybe because I didn't separate the paragraphs properly when planning it,
i gotta work on that
I enjoyed the story, but you could work on your punctuation, because sometimes there was a full stop mid-sentence.
Okay. But felt like it ended too soon. Would have liked to know about what happened after this final scene.