“So, this is where you live?” Gilda said as she eyed the abandoned building in front of her.
“Eeyup.” Sunset replied.
“Well it’s not that bad actu- no screw it, I’m not sugarcoating this. This place sucks, Shim! It freaking sucks! It’s old and ugly and depressing!”
Sunset smiled. “Well, me being a pony from another dimension, I don’t exactly have many options. So forgive me, princess, if this doesn’t live up to your standards.”
“Oh just shut up and open the door; it’s freezing out here!” Gilda laughed.
Sunset giggled and opened the lock. She pushed the doors aside so she and Gilda could hurry in out of the cold. Securing the lock behind them, she joined her friend as they both sank onto the couch.
“Just as I thought, it’s even uglier on the inside.” Gilda said, looking around.
“Yeah it is. But this has been home since I first arrived.” Sunset said with a sigh.
“Damn. You mean to tell me that you’ve been living in this crap for that long?”
“Mhm.” Sunset nodded.
“How though?” Gilda asked.
“I don’t know. I just somehow make this work. I sleep here and I eat and shower at school.”
“You eat that shitty school lunch everyday!?” Gilda exclaimed.
“To be fair, it’s not that bad once you get used to it. And especially if you have no choice but to eat it.” Sunset replied.
“You truly are unbelievable, Sunset Shimmer.” Gilda snickered.
“Oh hush you!” Sunset laughed as she threw a pillow at the white and purple haired girl, causing them both to dissolve into more laughter.
After about five minutes of pillow throwing, the two girls decided to go out and get a quick bite to eat.
“How about Sugar Cube Corner?” Gilda asked as they walked down the sidewalk.
“Definitely a no. That’s where they usually hang out.” Sunset groaned. “I don’t know about you, but I’m not in the mood to get involved with Rainbow again.”
“Don’t worry. You stay outside while I go in and get us something. Besides, it’s closer. And I really don’t feel like walking any further.”
“Aww! Is a little bit of exercise too much, Big Bad Gilda?” Sunset sneered.
“Keep that up and you’ll get nothing.” Gilda replied making Sunset laugh. A second later, her smile vanished. “I really don’t feel comfortable being out here, Gilda. What if someone from school sees me?”
“It’ll be fine. I won’t take long, I promise.” Gilda said.
After a few more minutes of walking, they finally arrived at Sugar Cube Corner.
“Right, so, I’ll wait here. And please try to hurry.” Sunset said as she looked around nervously.
Gilda giggled. “I’d mock you if you weren’t acting all cute.” she muttered quietly.
“What?”
“Nothing! Just stop worrying alright. I’ll be back as soon as I can.”
Gilda strode into the shop and looked around. She really hoped she wouldn’t see a certain five people here, but luck wasn’t on her side. She spotted them sitting at a table on the far side of the shop.
“Great,” she grumbled to herself as she got in line. All she wanted to do was get the food and get out without any problems.
On the far side of the shop, the five girls were busy chatting and eating. Fluttershy was telling AJ about animals at the shelter and Rarity was telling Rainbow and Pinkie about how the boutique was going.
As she took a sip of her shake, Rainbow looked up to see Gilda standing in line, causing the rainbow-haired girl to frown. She couldn’t believe that her childhood friend would go out of her way to protect the she-demon who just didn’t know when enough was enough. She needed to find out why.
“I’ll be right back guys.” She told the others. Without waiting for an answer, she got up from her seat and walked right over to her now former friend.
“Hey!” She yelled
Gilda looked over to see the athlete standing right next to her, arms crossed, and a big ass frown on her face.
“Shit.”
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Outside the shop, Sunset was pacing, still looking around nervously, and hugging herself tightly. It was absolutely freezing outside. She really wanted to go inside, but knew she couldn’t, for the damn Rainbooms would always hang out in there practically everyday. She really did not want to confront Rainbow Dash again. She’s been the most hostile out of all of them, even going so far as to physically hurt Sunset. She rubbed her eye, which still throbbed slightly.
“Still can’t believe that bitch threw a damn apple at me.” She mumbled to herself.
Though what she actually still couldn’t believe is the sudden betrayal. Not just from her friends, but from almost the whole damn school! The only ones that seemed to actually believe her were Vice Principal Luna and Gilda. She didn’t know why those two specifically, but she was still very grateful for it.
She was still very hurt that Principal Celestia of all people would jump on this bandwagon. Now she’s on two Celestia’s bad sides.
She clenched her fists in anger. “Mark my words, Anon-A-Miss. When I find out who you are, I will make you suffer.” She growled.
She suddenly heard what sounded like someone running behind her. Before she could turn around to see who it was, she felt someone tackle her to the ground, the wind getting knocked out of her in the process.
Her world spun. She tried to push herself up, but she was still struggling for breath. Whatever had tackled her was dragging her off to the side of the shop, into the alleyway. Sunset grunted as she found herself thrown in front of a dumpster. The tackle had left her dizzy and unable to see who was doing this to her. All she heard were two very familiar voices that filled her with dread.
“Well, Hoops, what do you say we finish that lesson?”
“Sounds great, Score. I’ll hold her up.”
Uh oh
Welcome back, buddy! Man, its been forever & already you're ending the chapter on a cliffhanger!
Gilda! save your girlfriend!
OH SHIT!!!
Gilda! Save yo girlfriend! Actually, no. Sunset, GET UP AND KICK ASS! I BELIEVE IN YOU!!!
Back for a few minutes and we are already going from bad to worse I see. Thing are going to have to get better soon or Sunset is going to be six feet under.
Welp, seems like someone’s about to get their ass beaten. Hopefully not my bacon horse.
Gilda Is going to kill some folks.
Hoops and Score must've made peace with their maker. They're actually going to risk the wrath of Gilda to try this again
Well hell....
anyway its great to see this story is back up and running silver
Saw new chapter
Me: YYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!
Can’t wait for the next chapter!!
here we go again can't wait for the next chapter. Seeking of which when is the next chapter coming out if you have an idea. No rush I'm just wondering
When’s the best chapter coming out?
Me: And I just had to do this.
(Throws apple back at Dash)
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Fair point.
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Who said Blow it up?>:3
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When someone mentions nukes they mean nuclear weapons or what happens when said device detonates
Dash is OOC for this fic. She would never physically hurt Sunset let alone shoving her, elbowing her, and "bumping into" her. But she's aggressive, so it's no surprise that she would call her a she-demon.
So is this dead? Is this nothing more than a troll?
Next chapter, a bystander calls the police, Shimmer ends up in intensive care, meanwhile, Anon-A-Miss continues to post.
Actually, that'd be an interesting twist?
Love this story
so is this story still a thing or nah?
come on we been waiting patiently
C'mon, we're waiting!!!
Getting past that first chapter will be hard.
Also DANG GONNIT RAINBOW! WHY!?!?!!?!?!?!?!!?
This is so full of angst. And I love it! Cant wait for the next chapter!
Will dis be updated soon
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Man, this is one of those story's that get stopped at a really suspenseful part. The author hasn’t been around in a year so I’m guessing there will be no new chapters.
Ah... another one for the "Oops all WIPS Folder".
Is there ever gonna be another chapter??
Update?
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Not only that but they haven't updated it in three years.
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IKR?? It's crazy man
I know it's been almost 4 years but, can you plleeaasse TRY to continue [at some point in time (hopefully within the next year)] please and thank you!
if you ever continue this story, make it a reverse murder case story please.
I kinda want more after watch that moriarty anime.
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I'll see what i can do! To be completely honest i can't remember where i was going with this XD
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no prob, was just wondering, thx for the answer
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Well, you've got another watcher here!
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Will you escape the "Oops all WIPS" folder? FIND OUT NEXT TIME ON DRAGON BALL Z!
I'm sorry, but I need to stop reading this fic. Everyone is too out-of-character and Sunset is getting hurt too much. I'm going to make a better fic with a better meaning.