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lillytheomegawolf


I enjoy reading and writing cute ponies. If my works brighten up your day, even better.

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Luna seeks advice from both Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash to help deal with a crush on a certain other princess. Silliness ensues.

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Well that was short and sweet. I always like seeing TwiLuna stuff from you cause yours tend to be rather fluffy and cute. And I chuckled at the brief Pinkie pop up and Dash being all flustered that Luna knows her pet name that Fluttershy calls her. This felt way shorter than four thousand words since it just flew by with Luna being in character and I do like that she has absolutely no clue of how to proceed at the beginning due to her age and how her predicament was seen back then.

Twilight and Luna work so well together too, I could see them be just doing random stuff for fun and not be bored. Don't know how you do it. Just reading a book turned into a fun little time. Wished it could be longer since the first kiss happens and then it skips to a few months later, but that's just me and that didn't impact my love of the story. The destination of getting past that first hurdle of asking Twilight was the heart of the story. Sometimes, you just have to see a few scenes and have the biggest moments. You don't have to write a long winded ship fic dealing with the minutiae of every moment.

And I just love brief fluff.

Also a nice Ogres and Oubliettes end scene, came out of nowhere since I wasn't expecting that at all, but it was cute and of course Twilight chooses the wizard hat. I felt like this ended with a chance for a continuation, so I'd be up for one, but also this felt nice too. So would I prefer a second chapter? Maybe, Would it be necessary? I have no clue. Would I like it? Of course.

Moar Twiluna is always good, just saying :p

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Thanks. I'll be sure to keep it in mind :pinkiehappy: and I'll see what comes to me.

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