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Princess Cadance has encountered a problem — a Princess of Love problem, to be specific — for the nth time. Feeling a little frustrated about what to do, she decides to visit her friend, the newly returned Princess Luna. After all, maybe Luna has some advice of her own!


Reading by Lotus Moon! Set somewhere during season four of the show. Sex tag is for implied situations and humor only. Buy this story! Contribute to the TVTropes page!

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Very nice:twilightsmile:

And I agree; we do need more asexual rep (everywhere!)

I have a question on this, though:

Never when I was a teenaged princess, of course... but once I turned sixteen? They were packed among all the regular letters.

Is 16... not a teenager?

P.S Luna is great

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I have sixteen as the age of majority in basically all my stuff. So, it's an adult, but a young one.

And thanks for the feedback! :)

I didn't read the description when I clicked on this, I just started reading it, and I think that made it better because I had no idea that was going to be what happened. Not that the description offers much in the way of describing things...
I can certainly say I enjoyed this goofy little fic. I gotta delve into more of your Lunadance stuff... what's left of it that I haven't already read, that is.
(it isn't much, believe it or not)
Also, Lunar Wing, eh? She's got herself a whole side of the castle now? I like that idea... finna steal that for some later shit.
You're a treasure trove of good ideas.

Short and sweet. I liked it.

Thumbs up.

Also, I thought long and hard about what I would write in response to those letters, and here it is:

You suck,

Leah

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Whoa, cool the verbosity!
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I can certainly say I enjoyed this goofy little fic. I gotta delve into more of your Lunadance stuff... what's left of it that I haven't already read, that is.

There's five total stories that feature friendshipping with them.

Also, Lunar Wing, eh? She's got herself a whole side of the castle now? I like that idea... finna steal that for some later shit.

Well, 'wing' would mean, like, multiple halls and shit rather than a side. I don't think I'm the first to have the idea, either, so steal away.

You're a treasure trove of good ideas.

I feel very flattered now.

And this is why you dont send the warrior godess to do the work that requires a light touch.

As usual the interaction between your Cadence and any other character is very enjoyable.

I shudder to think of the other cringy, sad, or outright disturbing letters poor lovebutt has been sent.

How does that kind of mailing work anyway? Security aside, send letters to 1 Canterlot Castle, -insert mailbox number here.- I'm sure the establishment of this system could turn into something fun and or cringy.

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You’ve got magic mail!

Do you dare receive it?

And thanks for reading!

Haaaa finally got around to reading thiss

okay 1st gdhgdshdsghsd I FIGURED those letters were,,, eugh

2nd - If I ever got something like that I'd simply tell them to fuck off because honestly? rude

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2nd is a good choice

I felt this was a bit ooc for Cadence. The goddess of love would certainly understand that love and lust are two sides of the same coin, even tho the writer perhaps doesn't.

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They aren't that similar, and in most instances exist separately. Obviously that's not always and that they contribute to one another... but not really. Love can have lust, though not always, but lust doesn't have much love in it.

It's almost like living without sex is possible!

Thanks for reading!

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I can't Spanish.

Great story, The world need more lundance.

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Yes! Yes it does! This account only has my close-friend Lundance stories, but my alt has an attempt or two at romance between them that didn't go anywhere. If you're desperate for Lundance, CoffeeBean writes varying relationships for them that are well worth the read!

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you should listen to Ice.

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This is always a good idea.

Always.

I've never read anything even remotely Lunadance prior to this. I agree that it's a very interesting pairing; combining the compassion and thoughtfulness of Cadance with the utter cluelessness of Luna. A match made in heaven!

Also:

"Hiii~!" I cooed cheerfully,

That made me smile. Using tildes in writing is the best. :twilightsmile:

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Luna is actually the thoughtful and wiser of the two (if you decide to go into the other installments in this looser platonic Lunadance continuity of mine) but she's eccentric and has an odd way of dealing with ponies. I suppose that means she could come across as clueless, even though she did give solid advice. Thanks for reading!

I like Luna however I can get her - preferably wise and insightful. Nice work!

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Thanks! She is always a delight to write.

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Thank you so much! I’ll stick this in a blog/the description soon!

Just to clear things up: was this recorded before September (which would make it a reading of the original version) or after (the revised one)?

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No it was recorded earlier this month if that’s what you mean

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Awesome! That would be the updated version!

I've kind I've always wanted to touch it and wind my hooves in the locks because it's freakin' psychedelic, yo.

The start of the sentence is a little borked. I also wanted to comment on how difference your Cadance "voice" is than mine, or any that I've read. It's kinda interesting, yo.

Great to see more Luna/Cady interaction here. Also great to see Luna more comfortable with herself and her sexuality now.

Luna's response to the letter was... damn. Somepony get this alicorn a mic to drop. I had a good chuckle at the "mom's basement" comments, along with the delicious depiction of ice cream. (And now I want some ice cream.) Cadance's letter won't be as effective... but her reluctance and fear of harming anyone at all, even someone who's scandalized her by sending such a letter to begin with, is adorable.

"What did you put down as the best flavor of ice cream?"

Cookie dough or bust, gaymer.

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The start of the sentence is a little borked. I also wanted to comment on how difference your Cadance "voice" is than mine, or any that I've read. It's kinda interesting, yo.

Holy fuck how do multiple revisions still not catch that I'm trying so much.

Great to see more Luna/Cady interaction here. Also great to see Luna more comfortable with herself and her sexuality now.

She's getting there! It's always something I wanted to write about more, but it's such a complex thing in her case that it really only would fit in long fics. Favorable Alignment, Enemy of Mine, and just anything above 20k with her in it end up dealing with it much more. The last ones usually have more scattered references here and there; the former two deal fairly heavily with her experiences.

Luna's response to the letter was... damn. Somepony get this alicorn a mic to drop. I had a good chuckle at the "mom's basement" comments, along with the delicious depiction of ice cream. (And now I want some ice cream.)

Luna was the Bearer of Honesty for a fucking reason.

Cadance's letter won't be as effective... but her reluctance and fear of harming anyone at all, even someone who's scandalized her by sending such a letter to begin with, is adorable.

Princess Doormat needs to buck up. Geddit, 'cause they're horses.

Cookie dough or bust, gaymer.

Ah, I see you're a woman of culture.

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