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Drakstice


Let me write and I shall not disappoint.

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The ponies of Equestria love their peaceful lives. In fact, conflicts of any kind are few and very far between. However, this does not stop visitors from beyond the stars bringing the violence of war with them. Can Equestria stand up to the rigors of the 41st millenium, or will they perish beneath the feet of violent warmongers?

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Comments ( 5 )

if a battleship crashes on a planet and its warp engines detonate you can say farewell to a small continent, because when they go off its creates a small star kilometers wide. And why is a battleship class vessel without its escort of destroyers or frigates. Dont get me wrong there is no stories about astra militarum or imperial navy and this could be change from space marines stories. Thou making one will be kinda tricky because how large astra militarum is you have to take in commisariat, enginseers, navigators, techpriest. I just hope you have read few books about them to know them fully if you havent i recommend Ciaphas cain books they would give better in sight if you need one.

Are they elysian drop troops because l don't know eny other regiment ho would drop their full regiment on valkyries, well okey there is harakoni warhawks but still. Wouldn't it be more usefull for regiment to be dropped on dedicated drop shuttles switch would carry full company and chimeras or salamander troop carries?

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I’d be surprised if there was an Imperial presence this soon. At least if the orks are the reason they’re there.

Hello there!
It is starting like a good story, and I cant say a bad word for your writing style, well balanced it is. I'm just afraid it is a gruesome task to write a full story treating both universes fairly and keeping a gripping level of detai. But I know that you already are aware of this, therefore I sincerely hope this can be next, more serious "Hearts of Iron" saga, it certainly starts as one :) Cant wait to see how you solved the first contact between Mankind and Ponykind!
Keep up the good work!

This is a interesting thing to see pop up in the feed, good to see some stories presumed dead making a comeback. Hope to see more from this.

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