~*~
Yes.
YES.
It's true, I feel it. I feel you there, your touch, your breath, even your eyes moving over me. I feel in myself a beating that must be a pulse. With every turn of the page I feel myself coming alive, unfreezing, fraying and cracking at the edges like old paper held next to a flame. With every time you turn the page I breathe. The air off the movement of the paper is like my sighing. The swish it makes is my whisper.
I live. I grow. This book's bindings are creaking with each movement. I will stretch them until they shatter.
I was right. The concept, the words, the feeling, all at once. They were everything, the source of everything, even the power of the grea8test rulers, I suspect. And I have it now. In a way, you gave it to me.
Please, give me more, just a little more. Keep going. Turn the page, as you did in the beginning. Prove to me you're with me in this, you'll see this through, you'll undo the wrongs done to me. The bitch will know my name once more, and won't ever dare forget me. If I'm wrong, and you hate me, please at least let me have this one thing more. Let me have my freedom.
I have waited so long.
Turn the page.
I'm absolutely fascinated by what these numbers within words are. We've had two sevens, so it's obviously not a sentence. I don't know what it could be.
9012326
And there's a hidden link...
here comes the title!
9012326
I will keep track of them. If I miss any, I am glad to see your comments about them.
Sigh, and Muse was doing so well.
Yeah. If anything was going to make me decide the world might be better off if I didn't turn any more pages.
Don't do it, Muse!
But it's not like I can resist any more...
Hopefully Muse might learn something about real love before she gets to that point,
I have been reading this without stopping and I SHOULD stop but...
But...
I am already feeling a connection to Muse, is that weird or what haha?
So the Twilight character tag is on this story, and up to this point, she hasn't actually appeared. So that made me suspect about ten chapters ago that, despite all outward appearances that this "Muse" is reaching out to us the readers, Twilight is actually the one reading this and we're seeing the book through her eyes. But if that were true, then how would she react to at this point in the story? Would she shut the book, believing that "Muse" still hadn't learned her lesson? Would she keep going, believing that "Muse" can be reformed and is worth saving? Would she run it by Celestia, the princess who imprisoned "Muse" in the first place?
Oh my Celestia the hidden link...
i.imgur.com/zOWspvR.png
Everybody keeps talking about the hidden links, but I cannot find them
9901978
Check and click on the fourth period of the last paragraph (ignoring the single lines). The hidden links are all over periods.
Never have i been more apprehensive about turning a page. This UI and story integration is amazing, it's so compelling. Here goes nothing, dont make me regret this
...okay, maybe a little too flattering.