• Member Since 16th Feb, 2018
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Jstarter


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Might wanna fix that description...

Comment posted by metroid_freak deleted Feb 17th, 2018

8740012
what about it?

8740027
The numerous spelling and grammar errors don't suggest that you used an actual word processor for the story even though you apparently did. When you were writing it, did you pay attention to the corrections the program was making as it checked your work? If you did, I thought you would've observed how to capitalize, spell, and punctuate properly.

8740048
The story its self was. give me a bit for the description.

8740055
That's fine but I highly recommend studying a grammar guide and learning the basics yourself instead of relying on a single program to do all the heavy lifting. It'll give potential readers a reason to take you seriously.

8740062
k. what do you think of the story its self?

8740079
Such a succinct response truly reinforces my belief that you took my advice to heart and as a result, will improve dramatically within the foreseeable future.

As for the story itself, it wasn't really my focus, plus my knowledge of D&D is cursory at best. I was more interested in reminding you of how important it is to construct a story correctly.

Uh hum MOAR PLS :flutterrage:

8742015
guessing you likes it then.

8742030
Yes I will follow this to hell and back.
P.s. not as cool as wow death knights but I will give it a solid 90/100

8742102
It’s a custom class I made for D&D, my inspiration was the Warcraft 3 death knight (death coil and unholy aura were used in the fight). i edited the paladin class heavily over all to make it.

Well damn, 2 years dead and just 1 chapter

10623930
yea. i need to go and fix it up at some point and plan things out a bit more.

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