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Jay David


Just a guy from Britain who loves MLP.

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At first, Fluttershy saw no issue with coming over to the local café when Pinkie invited her over. But, as time went on, she started to notice a few odd things. For instance, why were they sitting right next to each other, instead of opposite sides of the table? Why is Pinkie giggling more than normal? And why is she asking questions about their time together?


Part of my EG Continuity

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Comments ( 20 )

My love for things going horribly wrong is strong with this one...does that make me a bad person

"Um...yes?"

Well, at least you're honest about it and not trying to hide it.

Pinkie, as one would expect of her, was having quite a hard time keeping her excitement in. But Fluttershy, asserting her dominance in this particular situation, placed her finger gently upon her friend's lips, keeping the latter’s squeal from escaping, at least for the time being.

Assertive Fluttershy is great. Even if it's very subtle.

"You betcha! Can you imagine the looks on everybody's faces?!"

I'd imagine they'd be pretty happy for you.

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That makes you a great person, a good writer especially! Everything needs conflict! If not, our lives would be boring, all our problems solved.
I say wanting things to go wrong before going right is a very positive trait, especially among writers and directors.
Everything going wrong within a romance fic is a favorite of mine, because it makes all the happier when the issues are resolved!
For the moment...
Life is a rollercoaster of conflict, but that makes it exciting!

Wonderful story!
Are you by any chance planning to write a longer, more chapter-based story soon? Just out of curiosity, of course.

8793143 There are a couple of multi-chapter stories in the works at the moment, yes.

Well we know Pony Fluttershy to hang out with Discord often enough to get how his Chaos™ works,
no wonder her EqG counterpart would hook up with Pinkie, when the latter has her own Chaos™ for her to get.

Please tell me you are going to write down the reactions from the other girls.
Please please please!!
Especialy the Dazzlings :trollestia:

Dawwww, this is a cute pairing I didn't see coming. I love it :twilightsmile:

This was so cute, I mean, when I think in Pinkie, I imagine her so confident what is hard believe she's worried about something. I simply loved the way you wrote they, is a really good work.

I wanna see more Flutterpink (is this the shipping name?)

"Business, business, business! Numbers!"

*whispers* "Is this working?"
Robot: yes
"Yaaay!"

Cute, sweet, simple, and fairly well-executed. Good job; a nice little slice-of-life.

I will gently suggest that the formatting could be improved; double-breaks between paragraphs seem unnecessary. None the less, a nice story.

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I can't wait to read them!

Like only for the ship. Wish there was more. Still a well written story but leaves me wanting more.

Ohyesssss, this is the most precious thing ever! I love how you went about doing this, really warmed my heart with the cozy feelings and with these two :heart:

This was awesome. Someone please do a fanfic reading of this

Pinkie, for the first time in Fluttershy's memory at least, seemed to look just a touch nervous.

YES

"Yes...I did enjoy it. I...I've actually been thinking about that moment a lot since it happened.”

I have to be honest, it starts to get a bit old/odd that everytime "both people" are totally for a relationship right away. In such a situation I would like it to see that actually only one of them already has those feelings and the other one is considering to give her friend a chance, just to have a different situation.

Granted that I don't know if Fluttershy had those feelings, it could only have been Fluttershy finding out that she likes girls, the kiss I mean which they talked about.

Pinkie, as one would expect of her, was having quite a hard time keeping her excitement in. But Fluttershy, asserting her dominance in this particular situation, placed her finger gently upon her friend's lips, keeping the latter’s squeal from escaping, at least for the time being.

I like it and she does that without stopping to be Fluttershy.

Okay the first moment it looked like both of them had a deep love for each other, I thought it would be the same as always, but to be honest it was unique enough and it isn't exactly clear if Fluttershy is yet deeply in love or just thinking it wouldn't be so bad to give it a chance.

I think I want more, preferable a longer story.

Does anyone knows any stories with them and dungeon and dragons being actually finished? I only remember three or four tories from which two had romance in it, that were never completed as far as I know.

Not just their friends but their respective families too.

"Alright, everybody! I want no funny business! You all know the rules, and no ice cream for those who break them! Business, business, business! Numbers!"

This is from the LEGO movie. It’s really cute you added this lol.

I still prefer PinkieDash as my OTP, but this is nice too.

Not usually into the whole PinkieXFluttershy shipping thing, but this story was pretty darn cute, so I can make an exception. Very nice work.

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