8762158 Originates in Russia named by it's the inventor Mikhail Kalashnikov. Here's an archive picture of him with his baby: cdn5.img.ria.ru/images/102354/40/1023544085.jpg Tough shit, can withstand sand, water, mud. Do you really not know what AK-47 is? Mozambique even has one on their flag.
But, back on story topic, damn it. Man, you're doing good. Tempest's really in character, and I loved pizza roll scenes both in this and previous chapter. Really looking forward to the moment Sooth has to leave, because I feel like she's gonna miss him a lot. Poor thing is as lonely as a Mars rover, and... although this therapy does work for her, it better not become too much of an attachment. He already is a mercenary, it's just his sword is different. A friend of my once fell in love with a hooker. That didn't end well. He spent a month stalking her and thinking how can he change his and her life so she wouldn't need to sell her body, yet he didn't know that she's actually OK with her job, and sees him as nothing more than a creepy stalker.
PS, yo. Proofread. PPS screw the drama, I want to see Overly Attached Tempest. This is comedy gold.
Yup. Read my response to Ocelloid below. 8763111 Thanks for this spectacular comment. I couldn't parse your Russian, though. GoogleTranslate? I haven't really figured out what Tempest is going to do after. I just know she won't be making puppy dog eye at him. I am thinking about writing more about Sought Touch. He's a fascinating character on his own.
8772392 Nah, the line in Russian is just a silly joke. It's kind of rephrasing the old saying "no matter how much you feed a wolf, it still wants to run into the forest", but with Tempest. I wrongly assumed that you speak Russian, judging by the name and appearance.
8740726 Is the kalash really a type of gun?
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Originates in Russia named by it's the inventor Mikhail Kalashnikov. Here's an archive picture of him with his baby:
cdn5.img.ria.ru/images/102354/40/1023544085.jpg
Tough shit, can withstand sand, water, mud. Do you really not know what AK-47 is?
Mozambique even has one on their flag.
But, back on story topic, damn it. Man, you're doing good.
Tempest's really in character, and I loved pizza roll scenes both in this and previous chapter.
Really looking forward to the moment Sooth has to leave, because I feel like she's gonna miss him a lot.
Poor thing is as lonely as a Mars rover, and... although this therapy does work for her, it better not become too much of an attachment.
He already is a mercenary, it's just his sword is different.
A friend of my once fell in love with a hooker. That didn't end well. He spent a month stalking her and thinking how can he change his and her life so she wouldn't need to sell her body, yet he didn't know that she's actually OK with her job, and sees him as nothing more than a creepy stalker.
PS, yo. Proofread.
PPS screw the drama, I want to see Overly Attached Tempest. This is comedy gold.
You should mention the word Creampie for the next chapter.
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Why? I'm aiming for something a bit more intimate.
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Yup. Read my response to Ocelloid below.
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Thanks for this spectacular comment. I couldn't parse your Russian, though. GoogleTranslate? I haven't really figured out what Tempest is going to do after. I just know she won't be making puppy dog eye at him. I am thinking about writing more about Sought Touch. He's a fascinating character on his own.
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Thanks, Camolot. And the next chapter comes out today or tomorrow.
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Nah, the line in Russian is just a silly joke.
It's kind of rephrasing the old saying "no matter how much you feed a wolf, it still wants to run into the forest", but with Tempest.
I wrongly assumed that you speak Russian, judging by the name and appearance.