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Broman


A guy who loves to create stories and has a big imagination. Also wishes to become a famous Actor and Director.

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Princess Cadence is baby sitting the young Twilight Sparkle during a thunderstorm. To ensure she sleeps through the night she sings a lullaby.

Warning: Incoming Dawws.

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Comments ( 15 )

The word serene is an adjective and cannot be used in the title as a verb.

In the short description, Thunder, Storm, Lullaby, and Fully should be lowercase, and Cadance is misspelled.

Bad first impression.

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I made the necessary changes. Thank you for pointing them out.

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Thank you very much. :twilightsmile:

This was all kinds of precious!

Broman #7 · 1 week ago · · ·

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I tend to make stories that way. :twilightsmile:

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I accept you approved cuteness.

Cadance knowing an old Lullaby from the Crystal Empire, where have I heard that one before? Oh, right, I came up with that exact idea earlier (And wrote one too!) I haven't seen it done before, but it is a rather interesting thing to do.
Great job with this, it was truly adorable. I rather enjoyed that Lullaby, it's quite different than the one I wrote, and conveyed the safety Twi needed in the circumstances. (No, my lullaby isn't out yet, it will be in my next chapter.)

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I'm glad that my lullaby inspired you to make your own. I do hope the story was to your liking.

Actually what I was saying was that I had the exact same idea just hours before reading your fic. You know what they say, "great minds think alike."

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That's cool to know. :twilightsmile:

This is good, but just one problem though. According to canon, Twilight had no knowledge of the Crystal Empire prior to it's debut episode, so it's history probably wouldn't be in any of the books that Twilight read as a filly. Eh, I'll let it slide in the name of adorableness. :twilightsmile:

Broman #14 · Sunday · · ·

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Eh I try, just thought it give something fun to add to the adorableness.

Neat.

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