Rarity: A beauty, a temptress, a mare with a sense of style- Call her whatever you will, but there is one word she always goes by. Witch.
In a world where Equestria is ruled by both pony and dragon, they live in harmony. Except for the few that hate half the population. Dragons were all Rarity hated at first, until she learned to hate ponies as well. So, she secluded herself in the woods, only to walk into town to mess with ponies or to pick up some herbs. Of course, her hatred is not a secret.
Rarity, a witch who scares fillies, tempts stallions, and makes mares jealous. Spike, a kind soul, a generous heart, the prince of dragons.
Spike discovers Rarity for the first time and is head over heels while she revolts in disgust at him. Can his love for her help her love things again? And can he keep Rarity from marrying the snake Prince Blueblood?
You have my attention, let's see where this story goes!
This was an interesting start. I'm definitely curious to see where this goes!
Besides some grammatical errors, I am still keenly interested in this! ON WITH THE SHOW!
I thought Blueblood was a pony, not a snake.
Ohhhh, interesting. Definitly keeping my eye on this one! Great work!
I wonder if things wouldn't work out better if you stuck to the bet between Spike and Blueblood, and left out Blueblood's entire throw-Rarity-in-a-dungeon-for-no-reason plot. I mean, sure, that makes it really obvious he's a bad guy, but it's really on-the-nose too.
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I kinda agree. I feel like without the evil plot that was made without reason (which it really was, bad job on my part but meh, I like where the story's going with it) the story would be much less climatic and shorter than planned. I do think it was really in-your-face about it, which I do regret. But, I also feel like if things worked out that way, Blueblood would be portrayed as a Gaston-type, pathetic villain rather than a worth-while one.
I finally caught up and loving this story so far.
This sounds really good. Keep up the good work.